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Review #1, by her_mi_oh_kneeThere's Just No Way: Yea Right!

20th December 2008:
aww, it's cute! And would be adorable in the end after being frustrating all the way through what with us knowing the feelings of both parties...however, i do think it would be fun to see how you get them there...

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Review #2, by her_mi_oh_kneeAnomaly;: Derisive;

15th August 2007:
I like your style, and your characters, a lot actually, I really want to see where you go with this!

Author's Response: thank youu!! im happyy you like this.
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Review #3, by her_mi_oh_kneeBeing Bailey: Just There

6th August 2007:
Wow, I really like where this is starting out. Can't wait to see how it continues!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Review #4, by her_mi_oh_kneeHappy New Year: The Diary of Lily Evans: April 22, 1978

29th July 2007:
Your story is progressing very nicely. I like how you start and end every chapter with her diary entry. It's nice that you really are just telling the story of Lily and James. And your writing keeps getting better with every chapter it seems. All the comments I had thought to make at the beginning you had already fixed by the time I reached this job. Good story, keep going!

Author's Response: this is by far the best review i've ever gotten, and i thank you for that. you are very complimentry, and i'm so happy that all the things you would have pointed out have been corrected. I"m glad that you liked my story

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