I like this story a lot, just like I like the One-shot you started the story with. Benjamin is a lovely trusting character, who challenge Severus to love him like he loved Kaden without knowing it himself. Keep on the good work :}Author's Response: Hey, thanks a bunch! Yeah, he's going to present Severus with challenges he never imagined having before... I'm looking forward to writing the rest of the story. Thanks for the review!
-JW. Report Review
I think this story is interesting. I love the way you write it from Orange's point of view, because you really get that he isn't that old yet. It also seems likely that Severus would try to impress people in order to attempt to befriend them. I like this one, keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the awesome review! [: Report Review
George is so lovely. *sniffles* I love how this story is turning out :D SO of course it's going to be one of my favourites ;) Keep on the good work!Author's Response:
Aww, thank you. =)
-Carrie Report Review
Awww. Finally they got each other - at least for some time.. *sniffles* Lovely chapter.Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^ Report Review
I loved this. Truly original I must say. I love how you portray her insanity. She knows there's something wrong, then she tries to do something about it, but eventually her mind goes blank so she can't fight her insanity. It's truly great. I love it. Great job! (Btw. There's a few typos, but nothing major at all).Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm eventually going to edit some of those typos! I'm such a crazy procrastinator, though. But thanks again for leaving an awesome review, being so sweet, and being so nice! Report Review
It ended perfectly. It's so lovely it makes me cry! Really good job, really. Author's Response: Aw, thanks friend. I'm glad it was lovely and it made you cry. Tissue? Thanks for the review! Report Review
It's simple amazing. I love how you describe the simple and forbidden love the two of them are going through. It's a lovely story and the poetry makes it even better.
Great job!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! The review is appreciated!
-JW. Report Review
It's too lovely and overwhelming. It made my eyes water. Poor Neville, he is such a dear no matter what. Your story is really well-written and it must be a favourite of mine from now on.
Take care :] Author's Response: Aw, I really appreciate hearing that! You know how to make a girl's day! Thank you!!!!
Dragonette Report Review
Poor Hagrid, I really feel with him. I cried with him through the entire chapter..
I love the story, keep on doing the good work!Author's Response: You did? Really? Thank you so much! *hands tissue* I'm glad I could affect people like that.
Thank you for taking the time to review! I'll try. ;-)
-Anony_Mouse, :-) Report Review
It's amazing when people can make the reader's heart stop because something in the story has touched them. It truely is an amazing gift.
I'm unashamed for telling you that you made my heart stop, you made it stop and you made it swell with sadness. Cor, I even started to cry when I started to read about the young years of Ron!
Amazing story, I love it.
- Yasery.Author's Response: Aww! I'm sorry you cried, but I'm also glad that I was able to touch you in some way. Thank you for the lovely review. :] Report Review
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