Hahaha I love Benjy as House!!! House is awesome! Definitely my favorite fictional character ever!!! Awesome story by the way!Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you *bows* People seem to love Benjy a lot :) He is, without any doubts, the funneist character to write, even if I don't exactly own him :D - Lily xxx Report Review
This story is cute! I hope you update soon! Report Review
Yay! I can't wait for the next one! Update soon! Report Review
I like this story so far. It sounds interesting. Plus I love time travel stories. lolAuthor's Response: thanx... Report Review
Hahaha the quidditch match was pretty funny. I liked Oliver's commentating. While it wasn't as entertaining as Luna Lovegood's commentating, it was still funny nonetheless. lolAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! I had lots of fun with Olivier's commentating. Yes, it was a lot like Lee Jordan's, but I tried to write normal commentating and it was a disaster. It ruined the whole match. But I have an interesting idea for who can commentate once he leaves school. *mysterious look* And of course it wasn't as entertaining as Luna Lovegood's. That is almost impossible. 'Loser's Lurgy' *chuckles* Thanks again. Report Review
This is cute. I like it so far.Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
LOL I love James' reaction to Harry telling him that he was on the Quidditch team since first year. "My son!" lol Let me guess, Tanya's parents are Natalie and Sirius, right? I think it's pretty obvious. Please update ASAP! Report Review
I like this story so far!!! Report Review
Wow! Their demonstration was awesome!!! I loved it!!! I hope you update soon!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Uh oh! Somebody's in trouble! Or in this case several sombodies. lol I can't wait for the next one! Please update ASAP! Report Review
WELL IT'S ABOUT FREAKING TIME! i'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THAT TO HAPPEN FOR LIKE EVER! LOL Just kidding. But it has been a while. And so the pyschotic mother returns. That woman is like scary to the extreme. I'm glad she's not my mother. lol Please update soon!Author's Response: YAY they're FINALLY together-it was starting to bug me too, so i decided to put them together! Hmmm...Pyscho mother-that has nickname possiblities! But she is scary and overbearing! Next chapter will be up in a few days! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!~Cady Report Review
Sirius is a jerk. Sounds like Myung Jin needs to kick his butt. lol I can't wait for demonstration day!!! Please update soon!Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Report Review
Oh wow. People can be so mean. I feel so bad for the girls. Although Che Min should probably learn how to state what's wrong a little better so that people don't give them even weirder looks. I have a question about Ku Myung. Why didn't anyone think that she was a freak at her first feast? Did she just watch how other people did it?Author's Response: Yea, Che Min should! About Ku Myung, her friends taught her on the train ride thier in her first year. Report Review
There was a few spelling mistakes and the chapter was really short, but it was a good chapter.Author's Response: Thanks, I have a little trouble with spelling, but I'll try to use correct spelling! Report Review
Okay so, the Anti-Gone Charm kind of felt like a deux ex machina even though it didn't work for James. I don't know if you know what that is so I'll explain it. It's a technique that is used in films, plays, book, ect. to help the characters get out of a situation. It usually involves someone older and wiser coming in and telling everyone what they're supposed to do and how to fix everything. But in this case it was a spell. I'm glad it didn't work because then that would have been taking the easy way out even if I do want Lily and James back together. By the way, it's supposed to be ciao not chow. Unless that's supposed to be Sirius' way of being funny. lol Also, Cicily's dream was so sad. And in a way, it was disturbing too. For a second, I thought that you changed you mind on them getting back together and then getting married. Wow, my longest review ever! You should feel special! lol *grins*Author's Response: Um... I don't know what you mean about the Anti-Gone charm and yes, it actually did work for James. :D Lily came back on the wedding day, which will be explained later. "Chow" is actually how you pronounce the word in Argentina and other Central & South American countries. I think that I spelled it wrong, but I've always used it. Hmm... yes, Sisi's dream was sad. It's supposed to deal with the Anti-Gone Charm. The same thing happened to Lily except it lasted for about a week. Thank you for this long review. :D (and yes, I actually do feel speciel. ;]) Your busy escritora, ~Meli♥ Report Review
Oh come on! Did you have to leave it off there? I'm am very disappointed in you. lol I feel like a parent. Please update ASAP!Author's Response: Yeah i did have to end it there, sorry, I don't mean to disappoint!! Next update in a few days so just hang in there please! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!~Cady Report Review
Nice. Sirius can be such an idiot at times. lol I can't wait to see what the potion did to them! It was really short, but cute. lol Please update soon!Author's Response: Sirius is an idiot in a sexy, hot way. Well, he can't be hot and sexy right now because he's only thirteen in the story. Let put it this way, he's a cute, boyish and adorable idiot ;) Thanks for the review, Asian!!! ^O^ Report Review
This is cool. I like how this story is from a totally different perspective than other stories. I just have one piece of advice, try to slow things down. Everything seems rushed to me. It felt like you were trying to get everything out as fast as possible. But other than that, it's pretty good. I hope you update soon!Author's Response: Thanks! I had a different version, and it went slower, but it got deleted somehow. I couldn't remember what I did, so I had to make it up. SOrry about the rushing! Report Review
Awww poor Mary-Ann! Her parents died and she's all injured and not allowed to do anything. That must suck. I can't imagine what that must feel like. I have a feeling that you're enjoying torturing Mary-Ann and making up all of these tragic and problematic situations. lol I know I do when it comes to my stories. lol Please update soon! Report Review
You say that Rory's mom will be redeemed later on, but does she even have any redeeming qualities? I mean seriously the woman obviously doesn't have her head on straight and has some seriously screwed up priorities. Yayness for updates! lolAuthor's Response: Rory's mom is complicated and yeah she is a bit mental but something will happen that will change everything for her...so yeah she will be redeemed-but at what cost? that is the question! YAY!! Next chapter already in validation! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!~Cady Report Review
Good lord! Is Ashley really that blind? I mean seriously, Sebastian only started being nice to her when she put her contacts in. Maybe she should forget to wear her contacts and then she will know. Please update soon!!!Author's Response: I know, Ashley really miss the attention, but she won't admitt it. That's why she won't lisent to Sirius and Michael. But she's starting to see how much she likes the attention, and you'll only have to see how that goes ;D A update is in valuation now, so it should be out soon =) Thanks for reviewing Report Review
Okay, so when Ashley was talking about the girl in her dorm and how she herself is really shy, she got to talking about one girl in particular. But she didn't give a name. Other than that it's really good.Author's Response: Thanks a lot =) Report Review
Interesting. I can't wait for the next one! Report Review
Awesome story! Please update soon!Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^__^ Report Review
Oh wow. Poor Natalie. It doesn't sound like her life has been easy.Author's Response: Yes... I am just awful. *grins evilly* Thank you for the lovely review! ^.^ I really appreciate it* Report Review
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