Looks like we have the same birthday! Oct 27. I'm super disappointed she didn't tell him and how she kinda just cut him off with her assumptions but then, this story would be over kinda quickly, huh? Either way, once again great job at pulling emotion from the reader, even if it's frustration lolAuthor's Response: Yep! We have the same birthday :) *highfive* And you're right. The story would be over awfully quickly if I just gave it away >.< Thanks for your review! Report Review
I'm really enjoying your story! This is very great and I love how Autumn and James compliment each other so well (though I do wish they would spend some more time together!). Also, I don't hate Dom and despite her tendency to be self absorbed sometimes I like how Autumn gets her, though I hope she stands up for her relationship with James! You can be a great best friend and not be a total doormat.Author's Response: Awh, I'm really glad you're enjoying it! I'm having a great time writing it and I'm really excited about writing to the end in the next couple of days. I'm glad you don't hate Dom! But yeah, Autumn really needs to grow a backbone but... that's all to come ;) Report Review
Yeah, so sick of Val's pity party but yeah, she needs to be the one to reach out to James this time, he's rolled over enough for her. Though now I wonder how the family is going to react when they make up (cause they just have to) I mean, she has to apologize most importantly to James, but she also has to apologize to the rest of his family, cause I can't just see them being all "forget about it" (except for Fred, cause that's just how he is)Author's Response: Yeah, Val certainly has a bit of a mess to clean up. But she'll have to clean herself up first. She's got a lot of work ahead of her.
Oh, Fred. I quite like him. Oddly enough, out of the Weasley/Potter's, I think he understands Val the best (other than James, of course). He's known her the longest, and he gets her better than the others, probably because of his dad.
Thanks for reviewing!
-Laura Report Review
Can't wait until the next chapter! I'm so glad James finally broke up with that witch, why he still remained with her despite practically losing all his friends is beyond me, though there does seem to be some hint of manipulation involved?Author's Response: Thank Merlin they broke up finally! There reason he stayed with her is really quite simple and makes total sense in my brain. He was afraid that after what happened with Isa that his friends wouldn't want anything to do with him (WHICH IS FALSE). He was being stupid and clinging onto the one thing that wasn't leaving him which was Glennie. Report Review
Can't wait for more! Its cool how you are slowly piecing together her life.Author's Response: more will be coming soon. thank you so much :)
~siren song Report Review
Very nice! I figured Lily would be the one to figure it out since she was looking at her suspiciously but I'm kinda hoping Vi tells James soon. Either way, great job!Author's Response: Aww chucks, thank you! Well done for spotting that, by the way :) Thanks for reading! Report Review
To be honest the sappiness is awesome, simply cause there are not enough stories where the characters can be somewhat happy together without all this extra drama and heartache. Its nice to read something light hearted, hope you stay on the path!!! lolAuthor's Response: Well thank you very much, but I must tell you things will get a bit screwed up haha, I hope you'll continue reading. Report Review
Awww I'm so glad I decided to come look at this chapter to see they were reunited in the end! I was so upset at the end of the story I was on the verge of tears, it was almost as bad as when I read the seventh book (though there was no holding back those tears). I wish their love could have survived in life though, something so pure and magical always seems to get killed off i.e James and Lily. I believe the romance in the HP series isn't really all in depth and doesnt really strike a chord (because, well, they weren't meant to be romance novels lol). But really, you set the bar high for any good Sirius/OC story. Keep writing, your obviously meant for it :)Author's Response: Thanks so much, Sally! That really means a lot to me. I'm so glad you liked it.
cheers, Mel Report Review
loved it! laughing so hard my dad looked at me weirdAuthor's Response: oh the weird looks i get from my dad... and not just when i'm laughing. more like... well always. you could say that i was "special" hehehehe. no not special, just weird. oh well. HOOOOOOOOOOOOO. sorry, had a random urge. Report Review
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