Your story is really fantastic. You really pay attention to detail and give Eleanor really colorful, interesting thoughts. It's made me laugh aloud more than once. Something minor, however. In a previous chapter, I believe it was the last, you said that Eleanor answered a question about Quidditch in the Daily Prophet that was really easy for her (I believe it was about beaters). And in the last part of this chapter, she doesn't seem to know anything about Quidditch. Again, extremely minor inconsistency, but perhaps you could consider going back and changing the question in the Daily Prophet to something else. Report Review
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