I love the Kakapo thing. I'd love to see a flying Kakapo. I think you should've used the Kiwi though, since that's our emblem hahahaha.
I can't wait for more, this has made me very happy and very excited. Report Review
I like how Rose had no idea what togs are. It's seems so natural to us, but I guess to other people it's weird. And I like how Adelaide goes to call greenstone by it's Maori name then stops. Report Review
Rose and Scorpius yay! I can't wait to see how they respond to Kiwi culture hahaha!
Git is a cool insult, one that I only use thanks to Harry Potter. Report Review
I love this, I love all the Kiwi-isms in this. Absolutely brilliant!The characters are so awesome and so - KIWI! Report Review
I love Luna's reaction to what Lily said. 'She's usually quite reasonable', that is SO Luna!
Rose had a good go at those Daily Prophet reporters, good on her! They deserved it.Author's Response: I'm glad I got Luna right! She's such a tricky character. I do love Rose, and I am secretly proud of her outburst :P I think it shows the reality of life at that time. Thanks for the review! Report Review
‘Hey, Lily, what have you been up to at Hogwarts?’ ‘Oh, nothing much, just joined a secret group of Dark wizards, turkey smells good.’ - Excellent line, lol.
Oh, no, Hugo. I had completely forgotten that was coming, but when I saw that remembered seeing it previously. But I had forgotten, and it's a huge shock. Poor Hermione, poor Ron, poor Rose.
The small battle was very well written. I could almost feel the intensity.Author's Response: I loved that line too. I remember thinking, "Yay, Lily has a personality now!"
Thanks! I'm never sure if my battles are written well, so I'm glad you think that one ewas good :) Thanks for the review! Report Review
After you left me your lovely review, I decided to come check your stuff out, and after reading this, I think you're more deserving of a lovely review than I am. This is simply amazing. It caught me right from the start. I had tears in my eyes the entire time. You capture everything perfectly. Ginny's love for Harry is so amazing, the pain she endured is so incredible. This is so brilliantly written. I really don't know what else to say other than how amazing it was. I loved this.
~ginny_malfoy22Author's Response: Aww, thank you! That's so sweet of you to do that, and to say that. Thank you so much. I'm so happy that you've enjoyed this, sweetheart. I'm actually really glad, as I was totally worried everyone would hate it - my first one-shot, first time writing Ginny and Harry. I don't usually get beginners' luck. Once again, thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Allie x Report Review
Heya, it's Annie from the HP fanfiction facebook page! I must say, you've done a really good job with the description, it's a great beginning. I can't wait to read more!
~Annie Report Review
Dun dun dun.
LOL anyway, now I've gotten that out of the way, I can actually say something about the chapter.
First of all, I can see why Rose had to step down as Head Girl, however, they need to have a Head Girl (and Head Boy) who is COMPLETELY impartial. I feel so bad for poor Rose, it was so important to her.
Secondly, I love how it's split up the school so suddenly, yet so realistically. Something like this would bring very dramatic changes to friendships as well as other areas of the Wizarding world.
Thirdly, I love how we're getting views of this from both sides. It's a brilliant way to write it!
~ginny_malfoy22Author's Response: I felt bad for Rose as well, I actually cried writing that scene. It was insane.
I think it would split up the school in a massive way, so I had to write it like that. I also had to have the two points of view because sometimes even I don't know what side I support :P Every war has two sides. Report Review
Seriously, if I was Headmistress of Hogwarts, I would've fired Binns a long time ago. He's no good as a teacher. Scorpius should complain that he was spreading propaganda, it is no way for a teacher to behave.
Rose shouldn't be surprised that her friends don't support the Statute being lifted. I'm not sure if I do at this point.Author's Response: Oh, likewise. Binns is terrible. But how would you get rid of a ghost? As for the Statute being lifted, I'm glad you don't agree with it; makes it more like real life, doesn't it? That everyone has different opinions. Even I couldn't really make up my mind :P Report Review
I am loving this story so much. I like how you're writing about what would have happened if they had gone together, but you're not actually changing how things did happen. It's very clever. Looking forward to more!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I refuse to read stories that are Alternate Universe, but I always did wonder what would have been... I think this is a really fun alternative! ~writergirl8 Report Review
Not a very popular piece of legislation, I see. Although, I don't think any Muggle nowadays would burn wizards or witches, they would always be bothered by Muggle asking them to do something, and there will be the occasional Muggle who thinks they were evil and would... well, we know what some people in the world are like if they think someone is evil.
I like how you've written Lily. I know you had a lot of trouble with her at first during NaNo, but I think you've got it very well. She's trying to figure out who she is, not who she's expected to be.Author's Response: Not popular at all. And it gets worse, but I daresay you know all that :P I'm glad you think Lily's working out, she did indeed give me a lot of grief during NaNo, but people like her, so she's making up for it now :P Report Review
Ooh, the beginning of Lily's rebellion. As if things weren't already interesting, they're really starting to get so much more interesting.Author's Response: They are indeed! Thanks for the review :) Report Review
I can't wait to see what they do to Sarah, she is such a cow and needs to be dealt with. Report Review
WOOO GO HERMIONE! (though I knew it was going to happen, the privilege of being your NaNo mummy hahaha)
I love both Lily and Rose at this point. I love this story. I got so excited when I saw you had updated!Author's Response: Thanks! (To be fair I think everyone knew it was going to happen, considering I name her as minister of magic in my summary :P) Thanks for the reviews! :D Report Review
Well, this definitely seems like it will be interesting!Author's Response: Thank you, I hope it will be! Report Review
Hahaha corpses on broomsticks.
The duel was great.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
~AnnieAuthor's Response: Thanks! That conversation, believe it or not, was a bit of late-night NaNo rambling :P I decided to leave it in there. Report Review
Hahaha, I love how you added in the weta thing! This is another brilliant chapter! BTW I love your banner :)
~AnnieAuthor's Response: Thanks! I had to have a bit of fun with that :P I'm quite a fan of the banner myself, the artist is brilliant! Report Review
Nice foreshadowing with the hat! Excellent! Another good chapter, introducing the characters and everything. It's brilliant! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so very much! :D Report Review
I love this story. You are staying so true to the characters while still developing the relationship. It's brilliant. Well done!Author's Response: *I am blushing right now* Thanks! You've put a smile on my face. :)) Report Review
Wow. This is so good. You've done such a great job in everything, every subplot that you have. It is all brilliant! This was a thrill to read. I'm looking forward to the next update!
~ginny_malfoy22Author's Response: Thanks! I will try to post soon!
~Meg Report Review
This has been a very good story, I've been enjoying it a lot! Well done!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you like my story. Report Review
This is great. Enough said.Author's Response: Why thank you my minion from Facebook! :)
Thank you so much! Report Review
Hi, it's your Mummy! Well, I guess not anymore now NaNo is over, but still.
Anyway, awesome chapter. Just one suggestion; when you start from each one's POV maybe you could say from the start. I could tell eventually, but it could clear up any confusion.
But it's a very good set up for the story, mentioning Hermione going for Minister, which becomes so important to the story, and other such things. Very good :)Author's Response: Ello!! I did think about actually saying when there was a POV change, but so many people on the forums have said they hate it when people do that I decided against it. And thank you for the review :D Report Review
What drama for Caspar, Rose, and Livi! This is a brilliant story, loving it so far. Can't wait for more!
~ginny_maloy22 Report Review
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