Great job! I'm loving what you're doing with these characters (especially Severus, you're writing him brilliantly I think). :] Your story has really captured my attention and I adore it. Update soon!!!Author's Response: Thanks so much. Severus is really fun to write and I'm so happy that is has "captured" your attention. It makes me smile. Thanks so much for the great review. Report Review
Ooo, cookies. :o) Lovely chapter. I think 'troubling' is a word, by the way (I could be wrong though). Just thought I'd let you know. Glad you updated! Love the new banner as well. Great chapter though. Update again soon!Author's Response: Haha thanks!
And it is, that might be something I didn't take out from my BETA.
Haha, and I like the new banner too.
Hehe. That was so cute! Great job!Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! xD Report Review
I love it. You're very talented. Keep up the good work! Report Review
I like your style of writing...the way you write it keeps me interested and wanting more. I adore your main character, Angelie, too. Good job, keep on writing and I'll keep on reading! :)Author's Response: Thanks. I'm working on the next chapter and it should hopefully be up soon! Report Review
You're a very talented writer and I adore your story. I love how you write Regulus; the way you write him makes me want to beat the crap out of him. lol. Great chapter, keep it up!Author's Response: ::blushes:: Aww, thank you! I'm glad you like my story! And as for Regulus, I love him too! He is so much fun to write about. I love how he's like diabolically creepy-ish...its hard to explain. I just love him! Report Review
I really like this story, because it seems different from most Tom Riddle/OC stories. And I really like your main character. :) Good job and keep it up. Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like Maeve! Report Review
Short but well done. I still can't get over finding this particular story on here. Who would have thought to mix such a good book (Speak) with such an awesome series (HP). And it's done tastefully! :) I love it. Can't wait to find out who "It" is, though I have a bit of a hunch. ;) Keep writing and I'll keep reading!Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you like it!
Well keep reading things will unfold...
xD Report Review
This is a GREAT story, I read it and re-read it all the time. Which is why you should update. Soon. :) Report Review
Great story; it was really moving. You are a talented writer, keep it up. Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Very well written and well paced. I really enjoyed reading this, in fact, I've read it about three times already. Update son. :)Author's Response: I'm trying too! Ugh. School is killing me. But I'm glad you liked it. Thank you very much for the review! :) Report Review
Short does not always mean horrible, and writers block is truly a horrid thing. ;) Report Review
You really captured Bella's personality, she was just as 'sadistic' as I pictured her, and you did it tastefully. I enjoyed it very much, good job! Report Review
I think this was a great start, even though it was a little quick (one of the many problems I have when it comes to writing) at times. I love Alexandra's edgy attitude. Good job. :) Report Review
I think this is my favorite chapter of the story, because, well any kissing scene with Remus is good.
By the way, I think your story is freaking awesome. I'm hooked...from one writer to another, I think you're doing rather well with the plot and such. :) A+ for you. Author's Response: Lol, yes, you're right, kissing Remus automatically makes it a good day in my book *grin*...Aww, thanks so much! I really appreciate that! Personally, I think my writing is crap lol. Report Review
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