wow. wowwy wow. wow

that was so good! it was all "no harry, dont!" and "muahahaha"

*is in shock*

if thats what the book is like, it will be awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!

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that was really funny. lupin sounds ssso hot. but potter was funny.

Author's Response: I'm glad I made someone laugh. *smiles* I think I'm going to write some more - thanks for the inspiration!

And yes. You're right, of course. Lupin is hot, and Potter is funny!

Thanks SOOOO much for reviewing! *grins - wait, no...BEAMS*

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that was really funny. draco sounded really hot (tee hee).

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wow. i liked it, it was really good. especially the ending. very powerful

Author's Response: thanks! its deffinitly one of my favorite pieces

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whoa! i always new Draco was odd..
good! what happens next? TELL. ME.

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it was good.
do you really look like tonks?
some people think i look like jlo
were do u get your banners from?

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this is so funny!

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no way. they acepted this? it is wicked short!

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where is it?

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er, it was ok. i didnt read the whole thing cause it was long. make them shorter and people will read the whole thing

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i dont like the title much. it was... ok. a good dtart for your fan fic, but it could be a little bit better

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wow. i loved it. you managed to include everything in one chapter with out rushing it or making it sound dumb. you are the shakespere of fanfiction.

Author's Response: Thanks alot cocoa_spark! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! lol...although seriously, a comparison to shakespeare is too much! I'm really glad that you felt like this one seemed finished and unrushed, given its length and thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review! :)

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hurrah fior pronouns!!

Author's Response: Ok firstly I hav nt yet got a beta to read it and secondly my pronouns ant as bad as u make it out to be and thirdly even u urself admitted u suck at spellings ..... so just comment on the story or dunt comment ata ll

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have you ever taken a language arts clas before? cause there are these things called pronouns and quptaions.

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lol. it was funny but i thought the kiss between ron/hermy was unneeded

Author's Response: Well the plont line called for it, sorry you didnty like it. *shrugs* glad u enjoyed the rest of it tho!!

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kirsty, work on the multiple stories you have started

Author's Response: hahahahahaha.

i know, georgia, i know.

lovelove, jas.

*sorry to everyone else, inside joke.

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you spelled believe wrong.
if anyone is reading this and sayin: "oh, look how mean that person is being", its not trye. I happen to be her best friend. And i'm not making fun of her. I am a bad speller too. i was just ointing out the fact that she spelled it wrong.
btw, check out The Sky Darkens. its not as good as this one (which kicked ass) but it is still good. i know for a fact.

Author's Response: 1. Mean? You're calling yourself mean? gawd, (namewithheld) you're calling yourself mean?
MEAN?
2. I don't really care wether (spelled that wrong) the public notices my spelling mistakes or not.
3. Are you TRYING to make spelling mistakes?
4. The Sky Darkens was much better than mine (ex: adjective (ha! spelled that right!) and stuuf.)
5. Lolzy is the stupidest word that has ever had the misfortune to cross my ears.
Ta, now!

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it...was...awesome!!!!!!!!!!!

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i like it now that i've read more.

Author's Response: Cool thanks, I am glad. :) Dale aka PK

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interesting...

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i think its was great. Keep writing!

Author's Response: yay first review! thanks, i hoped people would like it I'm working on chappie 2 (well tecnically chappie1) right now so that should be up shorty.
Thanks for reading ♥

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