Ah! Shock! Horror!
No, stupid drunken Pug-faced Pansy Cow!
I hope the baby is born with Draco's nose.
Another great chapter, keep it up! xDAuthor's Response: Thanks I know about how you feel about the whole nose thing who would want a pug nose for their child. Report Review
Oh my God, that last bit of speech made me cry... It was just so perfect, and plus I love that song so much, tis my favourite at the moment. Jeez... amazing...Author's Response: well, darkest days, that song is one of my favorites. its always been, actually. and i was listening to it late one night..and the story just sorta popped into my head :D sudden inspiration, i guess...uhmm....yea it took me a while to figure out 4 a good ending, and a lot of changing the story around bfor i finally got it right, but now im happy w/ the ending and im glad u liked it! Report Review
What can I say? Woah. Totally unforseen ending that one. Definitely no cluche... Maybe a bit abrupt, but yay! Good story.Author's Response: Hmmm, yeah. I love cliche stories and happy endings as much as the next reader, but I don't know if I can write them. Thanks for reading! Report Review
This was a really good story, fabby idea. xD Report Review
Ooooh, I disagree, that was one of the best Song-Fics I've ever read. Panic! At the Disco have created a fabulous song, and you have definitely done it justice xDAuthor's Response: Are you serious? Wow, thank you!! Report Review
Harry sounded like an excited queen all the way through that. It was funny in a warped way... The ending was great. xDAuthor's Response: Really??!! Lol!!! Thanks so much, Darkest_Days! The ending was great? Huh? I'm guessing you were supporting Draco then, wanting to kill Harry!! Meanie! LOL. No, seriously, thanks sooooooo much for reading and reviewing. You've no idea how much it means to me, so cheers indeed! xx ;) Report Review
That was an absolute perfect ending! Sad endings are so much more satisfying than happy ones, and of course you needed her to die so Sirius could go to Azkaban. I almost cried when I read that letter... The whole story is amazing. xDAuthor's Response: Thank-you! (I like happy endings, but writing them... I haven't grown accustom to it yet.) Sorry I almost made you cry (even though that's what I was going for) but I'm glad you liked my story! Thanks for reading! Report Review
Oh, Draco defo go loco xD Me likey...
All insane chatter aside, this story is fabulous in its originality and i can't wait for the next update. Hope it's soon...Author's Response: I'm working on it, really, but my stupido but got myself signed up for NaNoWriMo and another comeptition on a different website. *le sigh* And then there's homework... *gag, choke, die* I'm glad you like it, though! Report Review
I adore this story, I don't think Draco's sarcasm is portrayed better in any other fanfiction. Keep the chapters coming xDAuthor's Response: Wow, I am incredibly honoured by your comments! Thank you very, very much! Report Review
Randomness is in the air.
WOOP!Author's Response: Lol, oh hell yes! Report Review
Oh. My. God.
This is definitely one of the best endings I have ever read! I think I'm going to hyperventilate. Seeing as this is the last chapter I'm now going to write an extremely long review.
First let me compliment you on the amazing story-line. I don't think I've ever read anything like it, it's completely original, and nobody will ever be able to do one like it again, firstly because it won't be as good, second, because everyone would know and they'd be considered a copying loser who can't create their own stories.
Secondly, I adore Draco in this story. He is so believable, I would imagine his inner thoughts in J.K Rowling's story, and I sincerely hope she does a Draco piece in book 7. He is in character through every single moment, selfish from the beginning and most importantly to the end. Who'd have thought he'd kill Hermione? You, obviously, but it shows how a bad attitude can rebound on you.
Thirdly, the dialogue. This was a hilarious fic, Draco's inner thoughts were extremely funny, and his cleanliness issues were typical of a pure-blooded prince. I adore his hankies and soap-obsession, they brightened my day after reading them :P And the scene with Tom at the Leaky Cauldron was a definite top. His biting sarcasm was entertaining and true, which just made it more effective.
Fourthly, I loved how natural everything was. Draco and Hermione just seemed to drift into love, instead of the typical Draco/Hermione fics, e.g 'And Hermione was super hott, and so was Draco, and then Hermione said, Dracie, will you go out with me, and Draco said, Hell yeah and they had a big make-out session.' I abhor these fics. I liked the way it took time for him to develop feelings for her, much more realistic.
Fifthly, Hermione was great in this story. She's usually one of my least favourite characters, as she is portrayed as a hateful know-it-all, or a as a tart, for want of a better word. She remained pretty and clever throughout, without making everyone mad. It was fab to finally have a likeable Granger. Woo!
I think I am all worded out now, but I just need to say, your writing is absolutely inspirational, and something everyone should aspire to. One thousand out of ten.
From your loyal reader, Darkest_Days (Ceri) xD Report Review
Aw, I feel so sorry for Harry. I wonder why Violet is attracted to a brutal murderer. Can't wait for finishing chappie xD Report Review
I'm so glad this story is being updated again, it is, and always will be, my all-time favourite fanfiction. Can't wait to see what happend xD Report Review
I really like this story, it seems to have the making of a good 'the plot thickens' fic, to keep people interested. Keep updating xDAuthor's Response: Thank you and I'm still working on the plot so it will thicken though I have the basic plot ideas the next chapter will be up soon and I'm working on getting a banner. Report Review
This story sounds really good, please please please with a cherry on top, update as soon as you can xDAuthor's Response: yay! you rock my socks too ^_^ I will, I promise. It'll most likely be here before next sunday Report Review
Ooooh, this is a very deep and confusing chapter. For Harry at least. I'm so glad he's gonna be different in this story, good Harry is too normal. I love the way you write, paying attention to detail, I always forget and focus on the speech. Can't wait for next chappie xDAuthor's Response: Thanks, Darkest_Days, I'm so pleased you liked this chappie, (Or should I say, relieved? Lol!) Here's a little fun fact for yu! I wrote this, in the early hours of morning; about two o'clock to half past four, cause I couldn't get to sleep, and then after writing about the baby and the other memories, it made me scared rigid! It was well funny!! Lol. :) Deep, and confusing? Hmm. That's putting it lightly, I think! Lol!! This is a very in-depth chappie, where Harry's psyche really awakens, and his divided consciousness plays an important part. This is, I think, the pivotal chapter for Harry- From here onwards, he will be consistently spooked by the visions he saw. Anyway, thanks so much for another great review! Happy reading, and happy writing!! x :) x Report Review
Yay! I am finally the first reviewer! Uh huh, oh yeah!
Right. Awwww, bless him, I don't know why the hell she would do that, but girls are weird and it makes good reading. Can't wait to see what happens next, I am spellbound xDAuthor's Response: haha... you get really close each time... but now you have finally won! haha YAY! *hands award to Darkest_Days with the inscription of "First ever reviewer for chapter 20 of SAB!"* well done! haha... I am really glad you enjoyed this chapter, however much it was sad at the end. Poor draco, he is just so alone now. =( haha... you will see what he does in his desperation. *nods* I hope you are around for the next chapter! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it really means alot to me! -- Carley Report Review
Ah, this is so funny, especially the second chapter. I can just see Lucius in a coulourful afro, and I thought it was clever to bring in the 'Bother' thing. I saw that on another site. Anyway, fabulous xDAuthor's Response: Yeah, eveyone I know loves that bother thing. I thought it would be hilarious if I put Lucius in an afro, and I was pursuaded to do a second chapter, anyway, I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reveiwing. Report Review
Hehe, this is an evil cliffie chapter, and you wrote about his hankies! Woo! I can't wait to see what's in the letter. xDAuthor's Response: haha I thought you would enjoy that. =D ... you will find out what is in the letter in the 21st chapter =) thank you for the review and I hope to hear from you again. -- Carley Report Review
Ah, great chapter, but Harry deserves better than Hermione. Make him go out with a Slytherin, hehe, seeing as he's turning into Malfoy. Or do whatever you want, you're the author, I'll be hooked anyway. Update as soon as you can, xD.Author's Response: Harry deserves nothing but pain of death!! Lol, he's mean in this, Harry is - you'll have to ask Snitchsista why, cos I have no idea!! I guess it's cos the whole island thing is causing them to resort to savagery, but yeah, who knows . . .
Any Slytherin in mind, Darkest_Days? I'm afraid we've already got far ahead with our writing and Potter now officially has a partner, so it's too late to change it.
Glad to know you're hooked, and please keep reading and reviewing!! We really love to see your comments up here!!
Dracana. xx Report Review
Ah, poor Peter, constantly seeking recognition, and when he didn't receive it for doing good, he tried to gain it by doing bad. In his opinion, he is better than James, because James is dead and he is alive. Life is always better than death, or so he thinks.
Once again, you tell a story so that you get the meaning, without screaming it into your face. Fabulous xDAuthor's Response: *blushes* Thank you very much, you really are far too kind. I am very pleased to know you liked this, and it is so nice to hear you comment on everything I had wanted to get across. Report Review
Woo hoo! I have waited so long for this update! My favourite story ever as well. The fabulousness of this chapter makes it up though xD. Violet is hooked on him, and he uses it shamelessly. But who cares, it makes good reading! I'll be waiting for the next update :) Report Review
Aaaaaw, love him. Lucius Malfoy and his mood swings. This was fantastically written, and in the second-person too, making it doubly hard to pull off, but you did it splendidly. xD Report Review
Aaaaaaaw, isn't that the sweetest thing ever? Normally I hate lovey-dovey stuff but this is completely different, I adore this story. Can't wait for next update. xDAuthor's Response: oh thank god I didn't gross you out! I hate the lovey-dovey stuff too... so I try not to put too much of it in... but hey I am writing a romance so I can't ignore it altogether... I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and as always I hope to hear from you again when I next update! -- Carley Report Review
Aaaaw, that was great! I pity Sirius so much in this story and I thought Numb was a perfect song. Some of the lyrics are off though. It's 'I've become so tired, so much more aware,' and 'Cause everything you thought I would be, is falling apart, right in front of you.'
Sorry, just an avid Linkin Park fan. Anyway, once again, this was fabulous. xDAuthor's Response: Haha, thanks for pointing that out. Boy, did I look stupid...
Thanks for the review! Report Review
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