this is a really great piece of work. you are a really fantastic writer and i completely forgot it was a one-shot-- i was so involved it felt as if id been reading for chapters.
really really great job. beautiful and insightful. the concept alone is wonderful: a loss of innocence, however justified.
thanks for the read!Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the very encouraging review! You totally made my day, and I'm very very very happy to hear that you liked it and felt involved in the story - it means so much for me to hear that. I've been wanting to write this for a very long time, mostly because this particular plot bunny just clicked instantly with Sirius in my mind. Sirius is reckless, he doesn't even think about the murder, he just assumes it's easy to commit because the Death Eaters are evil. But I think murdering anyone, no matter how evil they are, would cause this type of reaction in someone. Once again, thank you for the wonderful review, it was very much appreciated. Hugs, CJ Report Review
cute one- shot. your sirius is so melt-worthy. mmm i want him to myself. lucky dorcas hah Report Review
hahah funny idea to base a story upon.
poor natasha, sirius gets everything without trying. Report Review
beautifully written. excellent job- really touching and cheekily clever. Report Review
absolutely lovely work darling! deep and sexy and harsh- an excellent one-shot.Author's Response: thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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i loved it! i always love it! great jobAuthor's Response: Grazie, ma petite eclair. Report Review
YAYAYAY!! i am soo happy you have no idea. it was too short, i have to say, but it was still unbelievably written and passionate and real. lovely, lovely work. i wish i had written this, youre incredible. Author's Response: Haha, don't worry, I will update verreh verreh soon! Report Review
ohhh i am so so SO glad you updated. i was beginning to worry. hehe i totally second 'shootafallingstar'. i feel like suzie and i share a brain, not only in your story (because everything i think about a situation she encounters is what you say in the next sentence) but also in life. i completely understand her ...leaning towards older men, they are just so dreamy and mature ...m
really excellent story, wonderful chapter as always. i love the katie/suzy interaction and can totally see why suzie would be torn between really really getting along with katie and secretly being a combination of worried and jealous. suzie has so many dimensions and is a believable character, i feel like she is one of my best friends. i cant think of many stories on this cite that are so convincing.
the scene with harry is hysterical- i love that you incorporate what is 'actually' happening in PoA and that harry, katie, oliver, the twins etc. stay true to their ages and character.
lovely lovely job. update soon with part 2 please :)Author's Response: bah. I shouldn't read reviews in public places b/c then I'm just sitting there, smiling at my laptop like a weirdo. :P
thanks so much for your review, I'm flattered by the level at which you perceive Suzie. I'm working on part 2! Report Review
Very nice work! Curious to see what comes next. good job in delaying their meeting so we can learn a bit about the OC first. It helps when you are trying to separate all of Sirius' pairings in this huge fanfic world.
This is a great idea for a plot. (So far) fairly straightforward but charming and something that leaves you wanting to know what happens next. Good job, I'll be checking for updates!
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens, everything is becoming such a mess! :) Report Review
aww poor isabelle having to deal with such a mean boy. anyway im sure sirius is about to snap back into his senses. great chapter. :)Author's Response: denial is a horrible thing. glad you liked it! Report Review
Wonderful chapter. I guessed it was her brother (as I'm sure I was supposed to) but it was still very sad to hear about it. Update soon! Author's Response: ahha i cant get over the fact that YOU (absolument) read MY (floomasters) story... i mean, yours are just so great! thank you so much for reviewing!!!!!! :) Report Review
i dont know why i didnt see you had updated so many times. nice chapter! cant wait to see what happensAuthor's Response: thanks a lot dear Report Review
Very funny! I like the relationship between Sirius and the OC and the Lucius front is very interesting as well. Great job, cant wait for the next one. You have a very clever humor- that Lucius line (emotionally/physically) really made me laugh. Report Review
oh cant wait for the next oneAuthor's Response: ...me either Report Review
“My Lord, what do you want me to do if I’m in the middle of class and my Dark Mark burns?”
i like that the question comes back around. i mean its sort of a joke, yes but its a nice repetition or... w/e you call it.Author's Response: oh, it's going to come back around again. i really don't mind telling you that in the chapter i'm writing right now, her dark mark DOES burn in the middle of class. it's going to be morbidly hilarious! Report Review
oooh you really show why they have such a strong bond in OotPAuthor's Response: :D yep! Report Review
Rodolphus shrugged. “So do it in a bad conscience,” he said practically.
very clever and smart-ass of him. rodolphus is very well explored. :)Author's Response: ha! i've just always wanted to say that to somebody, so i couldn't pass it up! thanks for all of your wonderful reviews! Report Review
bella and rodolphus are so damn twisted. its perfect.Author's Response: yep. they are, aren't they! i love it as well. what fun are characters that are sane? Report Review
"She immediately began to feel pain like she had never felt it in her life. White-hot daggers were piercing every millimeter of her skin. She felt like her organs were being turned inside out. She had a pounding migraine and a clenching stomachache. Her mouth instantly completely dried of anything resembling liquid, and something burning was shot halfway up her throat."
really great description. great job, interesting charactersAuthor's Response: yay! i've always wanted to do a good cruciatus curse description, so I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
haha poor narcissa being told to think of boys at just 13...14ishAuthor's Response: heh. i know. especially because she's only a third year. but she'll be fine. Report Review
interesting look at my favorite familyAuthor's Response: :D they're my favorite family, too! i'm glad you like it! Report Review
wow. WHAT A JERK! please dont let him stay like this, i wont be able to take it. i mean cocky yes, thats on point but hes just mean! anyway, well written update soonAuthor's Response: Don't worry! All in due time. He's in denial. Report Review
hahah sirius is such an asshole! i like it that way though, it's refreshingAuthor's Response: ; ) Report Review
haha very funny! update soon and happy birthday!! Report Review
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