You have a good basis for you plot and your writing is good though I think your chapters are a bit short, but I know from experience that you want to get a certain message across in a chapter even if it is short. It is a good story and I hope you keep updating. Also I hope whatever the group does to the Dursleys that it is fitting to their nature. *Evil Grin*

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Interesting start to a tale. One question though how does a story with one chapter get 31 reviews (32 counting mine) and my story with 5 chapters only has 3 reviews? nevermind guess it doesn't matter can't wait to see how you take this tale forward in the next chapter.

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well how it was written it just seemed like he was acting weird by the way he was forcing Harry to go with him, and you never know what a death eater would try lol hell you could have James knocked out in a closet somewhere lmao Oh well keep up the great writing and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: lol, I see what you mean, thanks

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Very nice update and i can't wait for the next exciting chapter to get up. I can't wait to see how Hermione and Ginny react to the calendar idea lol.

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This is a good story, a bit confusing at times but overall good keep up the good work

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Good addition to a great story though I think you mistaked the year cause in chapter 12 you sent them to 1946 and in chapter 13 you put 1943 though it is still a great chapter

Author's Response: Oh gosh! You;re right! I am going to fix that right now! THank you so much!

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