i really like this story so far
i like how james is growing up and that shes threatened by it
really cute so far :)
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awww wow that was so sad but sweet all at the same time hehe
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wow i love this story!!! especially the ron and hermione drama because most people portray them to be the perfect couple in next generation when really theyre not
i hope you update soon
keep up the amazing work!!!
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awww i love this its soo adorable lol
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i think it was a good concept but it was far too short and not very believable that he would randomly say he loves her.
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awww i loved this it was soo cute that he was struck dumb and let quaffles past him lol
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awww i've read this story soo many times and i still love it soo much. I like how Ron is still as dumb as always but at the same time very mature. great story :)
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aw that was so sad and sooo sweet aww i want to cry now lol
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awww you need to update asap because i love this no matter how stupid i think lily is being lol great story
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Author's Response: lol yeah put it up for validation a while ago but the queue is really long, from now on i think i'll just post a few chapters at once so readers can get "faster" updates

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awww that was really clever and very original
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Author's Response: Aw, thank you! That means a lot to me! I'm very happy you enjoyed it.

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aw this story was so sad. i loved it though but it was really really sad :(

Author's Response: Thank you. I can't imagine the atmosphere in the house would have been entirely happy and carefree you know? Thank you for the review!

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awww this was so sad. bad lily bad. evil really. aw james cried :( you cant just leave it like this. you should do another chapter about the next year and he's mature. just make it happy lol. loved it though
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Author's Response: Haha Yeah I felt the need to get my views on why James matured so that does make it kinda sad and Evil Lily.

As for the next year....I might do a short story sequel. But I'm NOT promising anything because I have other stories that I'm really into so....yeah.

Thanks for reviewing =]

~Baboon

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very cute lol i loved the bit where james was crying it was really well done but i think you got bored by the end lol no offense
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Author's Response: HA! I loved where I added him crying. Tough men cry! (and wear pink) Yeah well the ending sorta sucked I guess but let me tell you a secret, I did this story in an hour and I thought the WHOLE thing was complete crap so if you only hated the ending I call that remarkable! LOL!

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lol this was so funny lol bless james though lol great story
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Author's Response: Ah, poor James. This series (yes, I intend to write several more similar/related one-shots) will be as cruel to him as the other (the first chapter hasn't been validated yet, but you should read it when it is) is to Lily.

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i loved it lol. especially the cheeky little bit at the end lol
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awww this is so cute. Especially the ending. great story!
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Author's Response: Thank you... I'm glad you liked it! :o)

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aw this was really good but so sad lol
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awww i loved this it was soo funny lol especially chapter 4 where they both get their dreams interrupted by each other lol. nice story
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Author's Response: Thanks, JimJams - Chapter four is, of course, why I've continually warned little ones not to read this story...LOL!!!

Have a good one! Paloma

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lol this story is sooo funny lol i love it its great :) :) :)
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Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you found it funny!

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awww this was so sweet :) i wonder what he did to make her angry in the first place tho?
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Author's Response: Yeah, I should've put that in. It's really not important though. Thanks for the review!

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awww this story was really good but it was really sad :(
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Author's Response: Yes, I know. :(

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lol i thought that was really funny especially the last bit lol. great writing!
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Author's Response: lol, i wasnt sure about the end...thankyou!! =]

-Alex-

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oh my god i thought this stoery was brilliant. i loved how you didnt have them kiss. it made it more...sensual lol that doesnt make sense but oh well lol
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aww i feel so bad for them both. wicked story. keep writing
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awww how sweet.
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Author's Response: thanks! Glad you think so!

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