Reading Reviews From Member: ANGELisCOOL
  
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Review #1, by ANGELisCOOLI Never Thought I'd Be A Hero: Only Business Right?

2nd November 2006:
good just thought id let u know uhh.. up top you put 'him' instead of 'her' ...

and at the end...' as her arms automatically going around his neck' ..

but this is good so far

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Review #2, by ANGELisCOOLWicked: Chapter 01 ~ My Beginning

2nd July 2006:
when i saw she loved the cruciatus curce i thought right away of bellatrix. hatrid started to boil in me. this is pretty good though. i liked it. id like to hear more

Author's Response: Lol, yepp, Bellatrix is my favourite chica! More is coming... I'm just finishing it up! Thanks!

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Review #3, by ANGELisCOOLWith Loving Hatred: With Loving Hatred

30th June 2006:
hey its pretty good n all.. but make it into an actual like book... but if it was a start.... it was good

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