good just thought id let u know uhh.. up top you put 'him' instead of 'her' ... and at the end...' as her arms automatically going around his neck' .. but this is good so far Report Review
when i saw she loved the cruciatus curce i thought right away of bellatrix. hatrid started to boil in me. this is pretty good though. i liked it. id like to hear moreAuthor's Response: Lol, yepp, Bellatrix is my favourite chica! More is coming... I'm just finishing it up! Thanks! Report Review
hey its pretty good n all.. but make it into an actual like book... but if it was a start.... it was good Report Review
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