{reviewid: 341931, reviewer: 'numb%20with%20pain'}
19th January 2005:
one word: whoa. honestly, this story is great. you clearly have a bunch of inspiration for this story. i like it! keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
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{reviewid: 225423, reviewer: 'numb%20with%20pain'}
27th August 2004:
very... haunting. i can't think of a better word to use. this is a very interesting story. i loved the banner - it caught my attention long enough to read this story. i love it. keep it up. 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad the banner caught your attention as I'm getting a few more for my other stories.
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{reviewid: 225421, reviewer: 'numb%20with%20pain'}
27th August 2004:
hmmmmmmmmmm... this is interesting. i know there are a lot of exchange student fics out there, so please try and make this original. are there going to be any pairings? well, keep up the work.
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{reviewid: 225417, reviewer: 'numb%20with%20pain'}
27th August 2004:
oh wow. that was good! I CAN'T BELIEVE I DIDN'T FIND THIS FIC SOONER! *bangs head on desk* anywho, great story. i love it. if you have time, will you check out my story? if you love tom felton, then i think you'll like it... here's a 10 for this brill piece of work...
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{reviewid: 225415, reviewer: 'numb%20with%20pain'}
27th August 2004:
i like this story. it's very well written. please try and keep this story as original as possible - the reviewers always appreciate that. i can't wait to see what you do to this story. 10/10
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{reviewid: 215408, reviewer: 'numb%20with%20pain'}
14th August 2004:
hey - i absolutely loved this story... i'm just mad that i didn't find it sooner... keep up the superb work...
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{reviewid: 214925, reviewer: 'numb%20with%20pain'}
13th August 2004:
hey, i think this is a pretty good start for a draco/you story. i think you need to put the character's personality in so it can clear up some questions and also cut out most of the author's notes - it's harder to read when they constantly pop up. just some constructive critisism for you... i have my own draco/you story and know what a lot of people like. i can't wait to see what you do with this story. please be creative though with what you do or everyone will call this story cliche. trust me, i've had it done too. keep up the good work and i hope this story will work out nicely... can't wait to see...
Author's Response: Thx..I really like ur story Fall For You. Please update soon
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{reviewid: 186556, reviewer: 'numb%20with%20pain'}
10th July 2004:
hey - i think this was really good... it's interesting that you chose the weasleys to write about, mainly molly and arthur... i think that's good cause too many people write about harry or draco or someone else like that (i write like that). it's almost refreshing to read about something else for a change... and i like the clock idea... very good...
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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{reviewid: 185432, reviewer: 'numb%20with%20pain'}
9th July 2004:
this is interesting... let's see what Venicka has up her sleeve... great job so far on the details... please make the chapters longer! lol...
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{reviewid: 185429, reviewer: 'numb%20with%20pain'}
9th July 2004:
hey - this is pretty interesting. it's a short story, but i still like it... keep up with the good work! and pleaz paragraph it better so it's easier to tell when ur describing something to when someone's talking... not trying to be mean, just some constructive critisism... (spelling? lol...)
numb with pain
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{reviewid: 174135, reviewer: 'numb%20with%20pain'}
26th June 2004:
hey - like you asked, i'm here reviewin your story... i think this is very interesting. a couple of grammar mistakes, and i didn't understand the char. until later but i think it's a good idea so i'm givin u a 9! (trust me, that's good cause i rarely EVER give tens)
numb with pain
Author's Response: thanx! i'm srry for the grammar mistakes! I'llstart trying more harder!
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{reviewid: 151089, reviewer: 'numb%20with%20pain'}
12th May 2004:
hey - i really like the idea of this story! please continue! it's sort of hard to read since there isn't any spacing but i like it!
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{reviewid: 137056, reviewer: 'numb%20with%20pain'}
20th April 2004:
howdy! i liked the chapter - i mean, why would i not? anywho, i'm really reviewing just so i could say:
*deeeeeeeeeeeeep breath*
YOU - YES, YOU! DON'T GO LOOKING OVER YOUR SHOULDER! - HAVE NOT MADE ME A BANNER YET........... hm? whatever happened to that? i won't review again until i get my banner................................
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