I like the whole Sirius not really dead and Voldemort at the beginning and not the end of the story.. very nice... And I'm glad you've paired Harry with neither Ginny or Hermione, that gets reaaaaaalllllly predictable! Report Review
Very nice.. i like your story so far! Just one bit of advice, after a dialogue the he/she said is in lower case.. eg; "Nobody would help me," said Harry not "Nobody would help me." Said Harry. :) Report Review
very nice.. i like your vocabulary too...so far, exciting and fun! oh, btw, if you have the time pls check out my first fanfic as well called 6th year at hogwarts, you might like it! Report Review
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