This is great, but you need to try and spread the boundaries, this is something I've heard before oyu should really try to get creative, but other than that, I grabbed me. What happens next? UPDATE!

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Write more! :)
It's really good.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, but I don't think I'll add anymore to this.

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good, but you need to update!
Why is Hermione so freaked at Draco bring head boy?
:)
good start.
sorry

Author's Response: its draco! picture draco as a snob or something, someone who was reallyyyy mean &did A LOT of harmful things to you. imagine a person who'd gossip bad about you. that's why. oh and THANK YOU VERY MUCH for your review!

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That is really good!
I like your outlook on the characters.

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GREAT! but you Need to update soon!
:) I like the ending, the whole theme really caught me.

Author's Response: Thanks! It's a one-shot, so I can't update it. I might write a sequel though. :-)

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Great, but I can't wait till the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response: thanks, the next chapter is on its way.

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Wow, that was really harsh, you've got a great idea going,that was really REAL.........

Author's Response: lol, well that was kinda the idea. Make the emotion come out, something that everyone could realte to... and it could possibly happen to anyone.

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