This is great, but you need to try and spread the boundaries, this is something I've heard before oyu should really try to get creative, but other than that, I grabbed me. What happens next? UPDATE! Report Review
Write more! :)
It's really good.Author's Response: Thanks so much, but I don't think I'll add anymore to this. Report Review
good, but you need to update!
Why is Hermione so freaked at Draco bring head boy?
sorryAuthor's Response: its draco! picture draco as a snob or something, someone who was reallyyyy mean &did A LOT of harmful things to you. imagine a person who'd gossip bad about you. that's why. oh and THANK YOU VERY MUCH for your review! Report Review
That is really good!
I like your outlook on the characters. Report Review
GREAT! but you Need to update soon!
:) I like the ending, the whole theme really caught me.Author's Response: Thanks! It's a one-shot, so I can't update it. I might write a sequel though. :-) Report Review
Great, but I can't wait till the next chapter!!!!Author's Response: thanks, the next chapter is on its way. Report Review
Wow, that was really harsh, you've got a great idea going,that was really REAL.........Author's Response: lol, well that was kinda the idea. Make the emotion come out, something that everyone could realte to... and it could possibly happen to anyone. Report Review
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