You can't just leave us hanging like that... It's inhumane, you know. This story is wonderful! The imagery, the thought, the... everything! It's amazing! You just have to write more! This is one of those that kill the reader if you stop!
And now I'm hooked on Dramiones... Report Review
This is a beautiful explaination, not unlike J.K. Rowling herself. Everything in here actually fits into the story so well. Not many people are able to do that... Can wait to read more! :D Report Review
Mmm... You know I love me a good Sirilily :D
You should have told me you updated... Report Review
You didn't tell me you actually posted a story... Tsk, tsk, Frank...
Anyways... The dialouge bit was a little confusing, figuring out who was talking...
Through this whole thing I was imagining my ferret talking to Peter Pettigrew... Very interesting, mind you... And then she bit him... for being a rat... 'Cause ferrets were bred to hunt rats, I think... Er... I'm done now...Author's Response: Ha. I didn't tell you because it sucks. Report Review
Please update! Ack! It's been, like, forever!Author's Response: Will do. I am currently writting it. Report Review
Ah, you've left the story at a cliffhanger... :P How did you get it all double spaced and tabbed over like that? I like it :D Anyways, brilliant read! To be honest, before the 6th book, I was always a bit of a Sirimus shipper... Sirius was bi, and Remus was gay... Seemed logical to me! But... er... Anyways, I giggled when I read this XD
And I'm not very good at leaving reviews...Author's Response: I really can't figure out why it's doing that.
I hate it! Report Review
Very original... A few typos, I should add... You have a habit of not putting any end puncuation. Just thought I'd point that out to you... I'm a grammar Nazi. XD Otherwise, very interesting...Author's Response: Thankx for the review! Report Review
Sirius really is loyal... to an extent... Yeah, I remember the roleplay with this... *sigh* Good times, good times... Frank and I are still managing to keep going with a one on one from that XD
Anyways, short, sweet, and to the point. Very good for reading it at midnight... I should really get to bed... This is totally random, but it ups your reviews! :DAuthor's Response: Ahahaha. I'm jealous of you and Frank. Aye, don't worry, I'm actually 6 chapters in, and the story twists quite a bit.
If only my chapters would bleeding get validated faster. *coffcoff* Report Review
It's getting very good... I've had you bookmarked since chapter two, I thought you should know... Though I've probably reviewed under the name 'Dyia' before... Report Review
I dunno why but I just thought I'd say... Lily and James get married on my birthday...
XDAuthor's Response: oh that's so cool. Report Review
Ouch... Tough luck for James... I hate to say it, but some of the best fanfics are of James' pain...Author's Response: Hehe, if that was a compliment in disguise then thank you, if not, then I agree *grins*
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