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5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by John Black

27th September 2004:

Another good chapter and about Lucious, I read somewhere that he was either for or five years ahead of James.

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Review #2, by John Black

Marauders Misery: Common Room

27th September 2004:

Good chapter. Just remember one thing we have learned from the books that Remus is also a prefect.

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Review #3, by John Black

Marauders Misery: Hogwarts Express

27th September 2004:

Another good chapter, I can totally see everything happening this way. The only thing I would check is the spelling on Snape's name, it might be right but I would check it anyway.

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Review #4, by John Black

Marauders Misery: Diagon Alley

27th September 2004:

Excellent story I am liking it already. We don't know much about them as kids but you portray them exactly how I imagine them. Can't wait to read more.

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Review #5, by John Black

Sectrets of a broken heart: The Diary

26th September 2004:

Pretty good story. The only thing I dont like is the language and the fact that they are sleeping with eachother after all those years of hate. Oh and Kreacher is no longer working for the Malfoy's and Lucious is a known deatheater and was captured. Even if he escaped i still dont think he would be walking around like that. Oh and please check out my story.

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