O_O Oh....oh man....that was so depressing........What?? I'm not crying! *Sobs* At any rate, it was really well written, but you just need to do a litttttttle proof reading (You left out like two periods =P Yeah, I notice things like that) I hope you keep writting, that was really good!!!!!! Author's Response: I'm getting a beta for all my stories soon... and what do you mean by 2 periods??? thanks heaps Report Review
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