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Review #1, by TwilightsCalling

Death to thy Enemy or Death to thy Self: Harry's fate

19th May 2006:

uhhhh, okay. good chapter, though i do think that the order is gonna notice if a muggle starts following harry everywhere he goes. lol! awsome job!

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Review #2, by TwilightsCalling

Death to thy Enemy or Death to thy Self: Full Circle

19th May 2006:

what happened to hermione? why didnt she come as well? oh well, your story. great chapter!

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Review #3, by TwilightsCalling

Death to thy Enemy or Death to thy Self: The Last Day of Bliss

19th May 2006:

awsome job, but get somemore details in there. i lost three days in there, and i didn't even know it until harry talked to ginny. some more details about the attack might be nice too, but other than that, great job!

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Review #4, by TwilightsCalling

Death to thy Enemy or Death to thy Self: The Lord's proposal

19th May 2006:

getting confused, but it's a really good set up. good job!

Author's Response: Thanks, yea I when I got to the part were they were going to prepare for the party I really couldn't come up with anything good, and I know I should redo some stuff I didn't really plan it out just wrote it and did quick proof read. Thanks a lot for the reviews.

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