I liked it alot! You have a nice way with words. Please continue! =) Report Review
Oh, and I wanted to add that I usually hate Draco/Hermione shippers, but your story is so believable, and Draco is so believable in your story; please make it happen! =)Author's Response: Haha. Your reviews are always so super nice. Thanks for that. There's about to be a lot more Draco/Hermione, so we'll see how I do. Report Review
YOU NEED TO CONTINUE!!!! I am just so hooked on this story! Please please please continue! =) P.S. I really want Draco and Hermione to hook up, hehe. ;-) Report Review
This story is really great so far; keep writing! =)Author's Response: Almost done with Chapter 3. It should be up in a few days. That leaves one more chapter. Sorry Chapter 3 is taking so long, it's very deep, and covers a lot of ground. Sorry if I'm taking too long, it'll be done soon! =) Report Review
Please please please continue! I love this story so much! =) Report Review
Another masterpiece! =)Author's Response: Thank you soo much! I've finished writing the Epilogue, and I guess I'll just put up new chapters as I put up new chapters for FFT, which is my current project. It's going great, and after FFT, I don't know... Maybe I should get on a train like JKR did and stare at cows! xoxo Sodapopbabii Report Review
Oooh, you put an awesome twist on Hermione's dreams! I love it! Keep going! =) Report Review
Yay, what a great story! I'm off to read the epilogue now, and I'm sure I won't be disappointed! =)Author's Response: thanks, im glad people are still reading and reviewing even though ive finished this story... lol. and do u really play the french horn, if u do ur awesome lol i play the flute in my school band and music rocks... lol xoxo spb Report Review
I honestly think you should continue this wonderful story! I love fanfics involving a NICE Draco, hehe. Mostly because he's so hot in the movies, but oh well! =) Please continue! Report Review
awww, you have to keep going! i love this sooo much! this is probably the best story i've read so far! =)Author's Response: Aww! Thank you so much! Just for you, I'm going to have another chapter up by Saturday! Report Review
Hey, I just read the entire story, and I have to say that I am extremely impressed! You are a wonderful writer, and I love how the story flows so effortlessly. A+!!! =) Report Review
This was absolutely beautiful. I don't have one single criticism. Very amazing.Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! I'm guessing you play the French horn... I do, too, actually. :) But I'm not a music major. Well, !'m off to check out your stories! Report Review
noooooooo, harry can't die! lol. this was sooo good. you are very good at rhyming! please continue and make it so that harry doesn't die, hehe. =) Report Review
Sorry to say this, but the horrible grammar kind of takes away from the story. Also, I was confused about what person's view it was in. And the whole "conscience" thing is a good idea, but you need to be more clear about when the conscience is speaking, and when Harry/whoever is thinking/speaking. Other than that, good job!Author's Response: Thank you really really really much... but i dont need an advice like that! .. I m only kidding... Thanks... I have to edit it all but critical advice such as this one does need to keep going! Once again, thank you. Report Review
I like it! The only suggestion I'd make is to work on the grammar, but that can be fixed easily. Nice work; keep going. =) Report Review
LMAO, this cracked me up. Continue it! LOL Report Review
i like it! there's many possibilities of what could happen; i hope someone adds to it. =) Report Review
Very awesome story. =) Report Review
This is a really good story. I truly enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work! =)Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, French. I really really appreciate it. Report Review
Awww, this is such a cute story so far! Keep writing; I want to know what happens! =) Report Review
This was very powerful. Two things though: the word "charred" wasn't spelled correctly (but that's the only minor thing, lol). Also, how could Harry be huddled in a corner? Babies can't really huddle, if you think about it. But all in all, it was a very good story. =) Report Review
That was gorgeous. =) Report Review
oooh, I like this. do continue. =) Report Review
this is a little confusing to follow, because sometimes i'm not sure whose point of view it is. other than that, i think the grammar could be a bit better. i like where this is going though; i like the idea of ron practicing in front of a mirror, lol. nice job overall. =) Report Review
Lol, I liked this. I wasn't sure if you were in first or third person though. Nice job! Author's Response: I'm hoping my writing skills improve. It's been a long time since the last time I wrote and I'm hoping that I'll get better with each passing story. But thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it :) Report Review
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