I have always liked Nia, especially in this chapter. Isabella is the one that I dislike a little. I could grow to like Sirius more. This chapter was absolutely brilliant, I loved it completely and I can only hope that in the next chapter James doesn't do something stupid. It was well worth the wait and I can't wait to read more. Excellent writing :)Author's Response: Thank you! And Bella? Really? Is it because her name is Bella which is now synonymous with quite possibly the most irritating female character ever created? It was completely concidental, I swear! Never mind. If you don't like her, you don't like her. Thanks again!! Report Review
That chapter was definitely worth the wait. I was so excited when I saw that you had updated. I missed the clueless Lily and the lovestricken James. It was extremely well written and I hope that you update again soon!Author's Response: Thanks!! I'll certainly try my very hardest, I always do. And it's such a relief not to have encountered any homilies on the length of time between chapters, haha! Report Review
The chapter was pretty good and I'm looking forward to reading more Report Review
I'm glad that another chapter is up. Life was bound to become really busy at one point, just don't drop something in that juggling act of yours. It was an interesting chapter by the way, and I'm glad to have found another feminist in Tegan.Author's Response: Amen, Sister Suffragette! :marypoppins: Thanks for your review. =) Report Review
Lovely as always. I can't wait for more!Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
I can't wait for the next chappy, this chapter's not all that bad, it's pretty good in fact. Keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
I love this song. The fic's well written and very sweet.Author's Response: One of my favorite songs, too! Thanks for the review! Report Review
I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next Report Review
It's great just as always. Well written and flowing. I have exams coming up too so I know how that is, good luck on them. I can't wait for the next chapterAuthor's Response: Thank you and good luck!! Report Review
Whoo hoo, another chapter, yay. There always so well written. Joy to all the fun you can have with drunken people! Another one in a month or less, please!!Author's Response: I will try! I'll try my very hardest, I swear. I know I always say that but having said it, I do always try but it's the decision between doing it fast and having kinks in it or taking a while so that I'm entirely happy or as happy as I can be with the end result. I love the drunk scene, it was so much fun! Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
Nice chapter, always love James inner thoughts- they're very much like my own. Can't wait to see what he's up to. Good luck on your new fic.Author's Response: Thanks! Haha, it's funny to hear when people relate to James, because I'm so unlike him myself. xD Report Review
I've been really enjoying this so far and I hope you update soonAuthor's Response: Aw, thanks.
And I'm working on it.
But I'm thinking of posting another story, that I am extremely proud of by the way, so check that one out to when its up. It is called 'You Had Me at Quidditch.'
Thanks so much for reviewing! Report Review
Good, good, I like it. Especially Ron and Hermione's reactionsAuthor's Response: Thank you! Ron's reaction was really fun to write :) Report Review
Great chapter, never would've thought it was SevvyAuthor's Response: Dear fizzing wibee,
I'm all for the element of suprise!
Your Obedient Servant,
The Phantom Report Review
Good chapter, I liked. No worries for the long wait. If you're still a student then you, me, and the rest of students are swamped by exams. Not too much long of wait which is good. Very well written. Report Review
How could I ever pick a favorite. I love your depiction of all the characters in the entire story. I'm especially fond of Addy. Great chapter. Please write more, I understand w/ exams and stuff since I just finished myself. Please update sooner, it's such a good story.
Here's to hoping you did well on your exams.Author's Response: Addy? I wasn't expecting that, not that I don't like Addy myself because I do but yeah, thanks for reviewing, I'll get on that update really soon, don't worry! Report Review
This was very good, completely loved itAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Yay, you updated. It was a really good chapter, always worth the wait, but could you please update a little sooner? It's a great story, but I always have to go back and read the end of the previous chapter so I can remember where I was.Author's Response: Oh. I thought I'd updated really quickly this time, oh dear. I'm sorry, I just have so many other things happening, I try to balance as best I can. But thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Love the length of the chapters. You write very well, very intriguing, and a great ending to this chapter.Author's Response: Thank you very much, fizzing wixbee! I'm really glad that you enjoy the length of the chapters, since I can't seem to make them any shorter anymore, lol. And than you for the comments on my writing, I'm encouraged to hear that you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review and I hope you continue to enjoy! :) Report Review
Very emotional, you write very very well, vcan't wait for the next chapterAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! I have written the next chapter, and have posted it, but it is taking forever to be validated! (okay, maybe its only been three days so far, but I tend to be very impatient :) Report Review
Hopefully you can update this story sooner than every three or four months,... you know every 2 1/2 months is a start. So for both chapter six and five you write amazingly well. Always very entertaining, good grammar, nice flow, consistancy with personalities. I love it. Nice length to the chapters too!Author's Response: Oh thank god you mentioned consistency of characters, I ALWAYS worry about that one. And I'm sorry about the waits, I really don't mean them to be that long, thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Great ending to this part of this story, maybe a sequel or continue the story leading up to the big day. Anyways whether you decide to continue not it was very well written.Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing Fizzing wizbee!
Luv AK Report Review
I love it already just after the first chapter, seems like a great story. You mostly write romance and just wondering if you are a Scorpius/Rose shipper even if this has no romance?Author's Response: YAY! I'm really glad you liked the first chapter :]
umm... I guess I am a Scorpius/Rose shipper. I'm a big Dramione fan, and they kind of are in the same category, and I may end up writing a Scorpius/Rose story in the future. just not this one :]
thanks for the question and the review!!
~emily~ Report Review
Very well written, meaningful, strong words, good.Author's Response: i appreciate it, thanks for reviewing Report Review
The chapter was written nicely with lots of tension and drama.Author's Response: thanks!!!! Report Review
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