i have enjoyed reading the first three chapters, and look forward to reading more :) the only thing i have to say really, is about chapter One, it appears cluttered, perhaps you could space out some of your speech? does that make sense? lol i hope it does! anyways, good fic, and like i have already said, i look forward to reading more.

Ettie

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Wow, extremely well written, this must be the first time i have actually sat and read 14 chapters in one sitting (except for the actual books :D ) you wrote Hermione's grief in such a way that i felt her pain, which is an amazing thing to be able to do :) I wish i could sit here and review each chapter individually but unfortunately i am at work, receiving very curious looks from colleagues but who cares! Anyways, brilliant fic, amazingly brilliant, i am adding this to my favs!!!

10/10

Ettie


Author's Response: Wow, you read 14 chapters in one sitting? *gaping at you* Holy toledo! Oi! Crazy! I'm so in awe that you did that!!

I'm glad you liked Hermione's grief. I've tried to be really realistic and to get the readers to connect with them, too... I'm so glad you could feel her pain! *grins contentedly*

Wow, thanks for adding it to your faves! I'll have a new chapter up soon, promise. I'm a pretty regular updater, usually once a week or so. And thanks for the 10/10, you're too kind, dear!

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lmao omg you had me caught off guard! lol that was brilliant!

Author's Response: Thanks! *grins* I think I like catching people off guard.. Hehe. Brilliant? Hardly! But thanks for the kind words!

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Oh wow. Seriously sweet and beautiful! I lobed it!

10/10 for my girly!

Author's Response: Aww thanks Etta *huggles* I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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Oh Cookie! This is wonderful! I havent read (atleast i dont think i have! :p) anything like this before. Well done girly!!!

Lobe

Etta

p.s. 10 outta 10!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks Etta! Glad you liked it :D

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*melts*
MORE!!!!!! FLISSY!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!
i love it, and i want more ... excellent work, well written and i loved how u captured Lucius and Narcissa, it is believable to think that if under those circumstances, they speak to each other like that. Well Done, 10 outta 10!
Love
Etta

Author's Response: *falls over* hehe etta, thanks so much, what a great review! *huggles* im glad you liked my interpretation of the malfoys and the story really wouldnt be the same if i wrote them as if they were james and lily right? lol i will give you more as fast as i can!!! thanks bunches for the review!

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lol i loved it! Well written Amy, well done!

Author's Response: Yay, glad you liked it!

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i loved it! Brilliantly written and funny. Well done Amy!

Author's Response: *hugs* Thanks Etta!

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Awww its all fluffy and cute and awww. I loved how you made the emotions tie in with the pace of the fic, very well written and brilliant. Seriously, i loved this mimi!

Love and Huggles
Etta

Author's Response: Awwww Etta you're a sweetie lol. I'm sooo happy you loved it ^^ and thankies for reviewing lol. Me love your reviews, always so sweet and nice :). Love ya *huggles*
Marie -xxx-

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“Oh bloody hell bugger arse!� lmao, omg Amy, i love you, your great. This was brilliant. I loved Remus so nervous and that alarm clock - wants one! Well written and enjoyable. I loved it.

Love and huggles
Etta

Author's Response: Thanks for another great review! lol, an alarm clock like that would be pretty marvy, don't you think? Glad you liked it :)

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*Glump* AAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY *lets go of the shift button* oh amy....that was beautiful...almost cried...ALMOST....but wow, very well written. I love the fact that Hermoine is going to be strong for her baby, and even better since its Ronnikins' baby. Aww Excellent mon petit pois. *wonders who will be the first to strangle her for constantly refering to them as her little peas.*

Love and Huggles
Etta

*would like to add I MISS YOU and everyone else!

Author's Response: Aww sorry I almost made you cry :P Glad you liked it and thanks for the review! Oh - and we miss you tooooooo, you little pea!

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WHOOHOO go Snapeypoo!!!! I always knew he was good! Well done mon petit pois! *misses you but is happy to have your fics for company* seriously, excellent work.

Love and Huggles
Etta

Author's Response: awww thankies ettie - lol yes i agree - snape is good. One more converted to the snap is good club lol

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*points at Amy and beams* thats MY LIL GIRL! *huggles Amy and her brilliance* oh i loved this, i did honestly, you are amazing. Seriously well done, i loved it.

Love and Huggles
Etta

Author's Response: Thankies Etta! I'm glad you liked it!

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Fluffyness! THERE IS FLUFFYNESS!!!!! *is not happy about Remus and will strangle him if given a chance* And oh i just love Molly! And you...me love my mimi/grandmother! Seriously though girl, well done, this is brilliant, i mean just wow.

Love and huggles
Etta

Author's Response: Awwww Etta you are so nice!!! Me love my Ettie/Granddaughter ;) I'm glad you love my story ^^ and fluffyness indeed!!!! I am fluffy rofl. But no strangling Remus, poor him...
*huggles very tightly* Love ya
Marie -xxx-

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I liked this alot, very well written and well done. Keep going, the only thing i will suggest is try and make the chapter longer then 600 words. Love u hun. Etta

Author's Response: Thanks Etta. The chapters are so short at the beginning because I was writing them at bball practice. They will be longer after the 3rd chapter. *smiles* Love you Etta! *hugs* I'll be sure to post the next chapter soon, so it can be validated and you can read it...hehe

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wow, very wow.

One moment please.

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Author's Response: hehe thank you. thank you very much! *huggles*

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Hello!
Okay, so, i'm not very good at reviews but i'll give my best shot. Now, i love it, i know very simple but i do. I think that things could move a little bit faster, but thats just IMO, im sure you know what your doing. Also, i like how you have a nice firm grip on the canon charectors especaly McGonagall. I loved the beginning. Right, i thinks that all i can say, except Well done and once a again i loved it. Lv Etta

Author's Response: Thanks Etta. Yes, I know the story is going a bit slow, but I need to get the story into the swing of things so that people can understand what happens-so I guess I do know what I'm doing. (That's funny) Thanks for the review! ~Gin

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Oh wow. Berni was right, this was brilliant! i was moved by the way which you portrayed Hermione, her feelings, her fear and not wanting to die. I am crying, it was so moving, such excellence is rare to find, but oh wow. The only complaint i have is you need to space out your speech, its hard for my eyes, haha but, in the words of Ron, 'bloody marvelous!' Lv Lilli

Author's Response: I know I need to space. I really need to edit a lot of my stories, but I haven't had time. Honestly.

I am so appreciative of your review; I'm really flattered. I'm so glad you took the time to read and review the story, and I'm so pleased that it moved you! I love getting "I'm crying reviews" (I'm not SO heartless, right? Doesn't EVERYONE love getting emotion reviews?)! Thanks again!

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*fighting over keyboard, Berni eldow drops Lillianna*
YAY! i loved it, i love Remus, i love your writing. You have captured the scene perfectly and made it your own, i love that. You are truly an excellent author with each peice that you write, you grow more and more.
*Lilli punchs Berni* DEAD ARM! ha! um, i think she said it all, except, this is the first one of your fic's i've read, but my girl know's what she's talking about when she say's your good, because you are, good, i can't wait to read more of your work.

Author's Response: I can't believe you think so. I am so ecstatic to know that you like my writing so much!

I think about Lupin almost constantly because he is my favourite, right up there with Harry. He's not only interesting, I love his personality and I want to be like him. I mean, I would like to be like a lot of characters, and not only the ones in Harry Potter, but I think I like Lupin's personality best.

Again, thank you SO much for taking a moment to read and review.

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