This is cool. Interesting plot line.. I hope that you update soon! Report Review
Oh my. This is the third story of yours that I have read, and even though its one of your first ones, this is really awesome. It almost seems... strange... that he is in a muggle hospital and they think he might be part of a homicide, but then again, it almost fits. I am not sure when you last updated, but I hope that you can update soon. Heh. I bet the next chapter will be hard to write with Severus coming, or maybe not coming, but his reaction when Harry sends the letter. :) Thanks! Report Review
I absolutely love this story. I like how you portray Snape, not being as much of a censored as before, not not so much caring either that he is just so sappy. Also, the way that you are stating everything about Harry being so good of an actor that he totally outclasses most of Severus' Slytherin's... that is awesome. Heh. Its amusing that Harry can think that they knew when surely no one would be able to observe -everything- about him. I really love this story and I hope that you update very soon. I shall be waiting for it. Thank you. Report Review
I love this story!!! Its very well written... and although its almost unbelievable in some ways, its what makes the story really good. Like when Lily says that James abuses her, and maybe that Lily could have suppressed Dudley's magic for so long. Heh. But I like those things and it makes it very awesome. Please keep writing! Thank you.Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to comment. I know that some of the elements I'm using are rather hard to believe, but at least on James' part I think it was not that hard to believe judging by the way he behaved against Snape in that memory Harry saw in the pensieve. Most bullies rarely change, and usually become even more violent as they grow. It was clear James and Sirius were bullies. Report Review
You guys know that I really didn't mean to deleate the story, don't you? ::gulps as readers stare at her with a mad glint in their eyes:: Um... guys..., how- how about I give you the next chapter! ::laughs nervously:: Will be up, I promise! (Or else you'll probably rip me to shreads...) ::laughs nervously again:: Report Review
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