I love, love, love the story but its "deatheaters" not "deadeaters"! lol it's just been jumping out at me! but great job, keep up the excellent writing! Report Review
I'm glad you ended up writing this! I remember you saying you wanted to write something like this when you reviewed my story (thanks by the way !!) But you did a very good job, it's well written and it seems to fit that part in the fifth book quite well!
-Ashley Author's Response: You were the inspiration for this story, thanks again for writing your initial one. It really gave me an idea that I could chew on and it really helped me get over the case of writer's block that I had. Thanks again for reviewing. Report Review
Good job Jessica. Not a bad start. Report Review
excellent story. i actually REALLY like it.. you're doing a great job writing it so definitely don't stop! it'd be great if you updated soon :) haha i really wanna know what happens!
from my point of view, i think you have the whole relationships between the marauder's and the girls right. like.. how each of them interact with the others. i like how its going, definitely continue!Author's Response: Awwwwww!
Thank you so much. That makes me uberly happy. Report Review
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