Cliché Report Courtasy of "Harry Potter and the Endless Cliché" Author...
1) OC whose name is introduced in the first sentence with a nickname introduced soon after...
2) Angst-ridden sleep
3) Americanized (Sing-Sing, Riker's...)
4) Author writing self into story (hmm, a girl who likes to write and writes pretty terribly in her composition book...)
5) Main Harry Potter character making mysterious appearence
6) OC has some attitude! (bites hand)
And here, I have to stop. It's just an overload. Hahahahaha! But hey, I've seen much worse. It's definitely a good start, I can see why this story has so many reads. :-DAuthor's Response: 1) oh goodness. at least i didn't include a detailed physical inventory within the first sentances. that really irks me.
2)i cannot dodge this one. it is truly an overused cliche
3)i AM an american! and so is Cat! (i didn't live in the UK long enough to write like one!)
4) thanks. come to think of it, Cat is a bit of a narcissistic self-portrait. (though not as much as my version of Pansy, who even has my name)
5)Undodgeable Cliche. Eep. they just keep piling up...
6)I should hope so! if Cat were a sop, I wouldn't write about her!
Heyyyyy. Thanks. I'm glad I could amuse you, if only for a short while. I'm tryyyying to be more aware of my own cheez factor. Honest, I am! Thanks! I'm glad you like it! Report Review
This piece is beautiful. I loved the way you used language and style and I loved the way the story progressed. Great work!!Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! This story was completely out of my comfort zone, and I wasn't confident about how it would be received. So I really appreciate you taking the time to review :D
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Your prose if beautiful and I love the unique ambiguous aspect of this! Great work!!Author's Response: wow, thank you! ^___^ i'm so glad you enjoyed the story! thanks so much for reviewing! Report Review
Oh wow! This story was really well-written and Cedric/Harry is such a great pairing!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
I don't usually like Founders, but I'm happy I did this time!
P.S. Your banner's really pretty. And the story was so cute!Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm pleased that this fic got you to open your mind a bit to try something new. There are not many fans of founderfic.... We could use a few more readers like yourself. :3
And, thank you for the compliments! I am far too lazy to quest about for a good graphics artist, and far too shy to make a request, so I end up making my own banners with what little tools I have.... xD Report Review
I love how well you wove in both fluff and angst...and the idea for the story is so original! Great job!!Author's Response: Thank you! I seem to find writing angst a lot easier than anything else :D
Original? Well, good, I'm glad :)
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Now that's the way to do it! Hahahaha great story, loved the ending. Good job keeping it real!Author's Response: Haha, liked it eh? Happy to hear. (o; Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
AHH IT'S SO GOOD!! I admit it, I cried, and that doesn't happen oftenAuthor's Response: Yay, thanks for the review! Report Review
AWW YAY it was such a great ending, Julie! Really really good! I liked the whole speech and how it and the final little section really made the story much more uplifting than your normal average tragedy! I'm very honored that, not only did you use my idea for the ending, but you also even mentioned me in the Author's Notes. Haha thanks for putting my name in all caps!! Put my account there too haha so you can have all of your trillion readers and favorites and everyone else who loves you read my stuff too! Only kidding!! But great work and I can't wait to see what's coming next!
Your beta and friend,
Bobby :-)Author's Response: Thanks Bobby, I am so happy you like it! And I'm glad you liked the speech. I did that in my living room while watching TV heheh. Everyone GO READ BOBBY'S FICS CAUSE THEY ARE AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Report Review
This is a really well-written story, I have to say. I think the best aspect of it is that you really capture the characters J.K. Rowling has given to us and you keep them real. You also really take advantage of Hogwarts and the Wizarding World. It's really hard to write a fic that really resembles J.K.'s writing, but you have done a spectacular job! Yay Julie!!!Author's Response: Why thank you Robert :-D I'm glad you liked it rotfl! I love your stories too Report Review
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