Author's Response: Thank, I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
I really do envy your writting skills and I'm soory to say but
NO!!!YOU CAN'T DO THAT!YOU'RE TOO GOOD TO KEEP US WAITING THAT LONG! Report Review
I need more!Author's Response: teehee. okay next chapter is in the works. i just need to work out order...if that makes sense...
2 pathways and one story and i know pick your own endings dont work here (but imagine!) so i need to fix that...
til then thanks! Report Review
i need more!Author's Response: And you'll get more! Report Review
keep it up!Author's Response: I'll try! Report Review
that was way too short
you have to update soon if that is all your giving us for now
great duel!Author's Response: I'm sorry that this chapter had been cut short, but at least it was action packed! lol. Thank you so much for the review! - Jenn Report Review
that was freaking hilarious!!
You are the funniest author i've read from so far.
This story is great!!!
update soon!Author's Response: Wow, I'm not sure if I deserve that, but thanks so much, I'll take it! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. The next chapter's been posted - hopefully you'll get to read it soon! Report Review
i love her additude! She so freaking crazy it's great!!Author's Response: Haha, thanks. I think so too! Report Review
I LOVE THIS STORY!Author's Response: ^_^ Thank you! Report Review
great chapter, but it was too short and you need to update more often!
Good job, hope to see more from you on this one! Report Review
I knew that he would have problems with Ginny. But I didn't expect the reaction to be so eloquent.
P.S. Are the letters coming from some future/past version of himself?Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the chapter and found his reaction to Ginny unexpected! I hope you enjoy the latest chapter as much! - Jenn
P.S. Your question will be answered before the last chapter is posted. :] Report Review
It's been too long. I need another chapter.
I love the peach taffeta and the attitude that this character has, not a lot of people can pull off a first-person narrative, I hope it works out.
I love it! Keep it up, update soon and update often!Author's Response: firstly thanks and secondly i know! i have never witten a story in first person...we shall see how it goes! hope to hear from you again!!! Report Review
interesting, I like the plot, even if it is a little hard to follow. Try cleaning up your similies and allusions a little bit and i think that will make it a little easier to read. Very good though. 8Author's Response: thank you! Report Review
great start! Keep it up! Report Review
wow, this chapter was amazing. Great job. I would understand why you would kill off Tonks, if that's what happened. Harry was focusing too much on the past and not looking to his future. He was living in a sort of funk, where he was just alive and not living. Maybe that's why he has been having those dark tendencies. Maybe the perfect way yo keep him away from the darkness is to give him something that he is extraordinary at, such as the Ravenclaw book!!! It just seems that he doesn't have the passion for the whole auror thing and he's there just to be closer to Tonks. Now, if she's really gone, he'll reevaluate his life-choises but only after a brief peroid of being a dark wizard in order to bring the point home.
lol, I just wrote a ton. Maybe I'm just reading into this too much but that is just how in depth you characterizations are, they have more dimentions than J.K.R.'s.
This is a superb story and I hope that you'll be updating soon. It's been too long already. Report Review
ahhhhh!! this chapter was way too short! you have to update soon. and i'll freak out if hermione ends up with draco. he's such a whinny git! she would be much better suited with sirius.
this chapter reminds me of that old attage: If you love her let her go.Author's Response: Lots of people are saying that! Don't you feel sorry for him at all? Poor Draco *sniffs* he's losing all his fans. Thanks for the review! :) Report Review
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