I love the end and all of the plot twists. I thought Hermione would chose Jasper but I guess Malfoy is the better choice. He's actually grown on me in this. :)
You're a great writer and I love your work,
Ravensdaughter

Author's Response: Dear Ravensdaughter,
I am flattered by your review, thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!
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Wow I love the twist with the adoptive parent and the invitation at the end.
Your writing is amazing
Can't wait to read the next chapter
Ravensdaughterx

Author's Response: Dear Ravensdaughter,
thanx so much for the encouraging review, you are really kind!
The next chappie is in progress.
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I like the quote but I really hope Hermione and Jasper get back together. Great writing as always.
I'd really love to get your opinion on one of my stories if that's ok.
Ravensdaughter

Author's Response: So you prefer Jasper... ;)
Well, unfortunately I don't have too much time to spend at the computer, recently I haven't been able to read the stories of my friends, either. I'm happy if I can write the next chapter and answer the reviews, so it is not likely I can read your stories now. Maybe later. (But you are very sweet that you'd like to know my opinion, I am really flattered...)
Thanx for your review and kind words!
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I really love your stories. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Ravensdaughterx

Author's Response: Dear Ravensdaughter,
thank you for the kind words, they are really motivating!
The next chapter is awaiting validation.
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Wow nice twist with the horcrux...

Author's Response: Glad you like it! :)
Thanx for reading and reviewing!
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That was great- and I love the Agatha Christie's Poirot mention. I really love the tv series but I've got to read the books.
Ravensdaughter

Author's Response: Dear Ravensdaughter,
I'm happy you enjoy the story :)
I love Agatha Christie, too, I prefer the books to the films.
Thanx for the lovely review!
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That's really good. I can't wait to read the rest.

Author's Response: Thanx for the positive feedback!
I have posted chapter 2, awaiting validation.
Hugs xxx

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This is so pretty and beautiful.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!! = )

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I love this. It emotionally overwhelmed me.

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I love it. Especialy the last chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading the whole thing. It was so much fun to write. :)

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This is really, really good. Really it's amazing. I can't wait to read the rest of it.
Ravensdaughter

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I can't believe Cho is such a horrible person! It's so good the way you characterised all of your characters. i can't wait to finish this. It's fantastic.

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Nice twist: Amanda, Mrs Emily Green and Jake Smith all close to the good guys are the ultimate bad ones. Can't wait to read the rest.

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I can't believe Ron is cheating on Hermione. That's really good characterisation. You've completely torn me between who Hermione should chose Draco the murduring, horrible but sometimes good guy or Ron the loving but cheating husband. Poor Hermione.

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Wow. I think I prefer Draco the horrible, snotty teenager than Draco the I'm-going-to-curse-my-cheating-wife-with-a-necklace-that-i-used-to-kill-my-old-headteacher. Really good writing can't wait to see what happens next.
By the way I've got new chapters up iif you want o look.
Ravensdaughter

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Hi Aashna,
This is really sweet. Harry's nervousness was really well portrayed- much better than the nerves he got around Cho.
I just like to ask if you can look at the start of my story 'In the beginning...'. I'd like your advice on the writing.
Ravensdaughter

Author's Response: Hello Ravensdaughter
nice 2 hear frm u *smiles* Gettin comments on endins really makes feel gud n equally gud is ur heartfelt review. thank u 4 writin me one n sharin ur precious thoughts. I am gald u liked Harry's characterisation, i really had 2 work hard on dat 1, imaginin a 14 yr old guy who gets nervous around gals more dan being around a fire-breathin dragon.. I am glad u cud percieve dat n thanx 4 ur authentic comment on d said..
n sure, i'll love 2 read ur story, I am on my way :) :)

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I really like this chapter.

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Aw...
So sweet. I really like this story. I'll read more of your stories soon. I like the way you got them together and made Dracio such a likeable character.

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I love this!
Thanks for adding me as a favourite author!
Ravensdaughter

Author's Response: Thanx a lot 4 ur awesome comment.. i am xtremely happy n thrilled dat u really love my story so far *Smiles gleefully* I hope u like d rest of d chappies as well *eager 2 hear ur views on dem* :) :) Anyways, thanx 4 writin me such a sugary review.
PS: Ur most welcome, i liked ur writin flare n so i added u *smiles*


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Cool. I love how you've added new characters and taken original characters and made their presence more notable. The way Draco and Lucious argue is amazingly realistic. I'll read the rest soon.
Ravensdaughter

Author's Response: Hello Ravens Daughter
Its a gr8 pleasure 2 c ur review here, makes me really happy :) :) I am so glad dat u njoyed d very first chappie n u liked d various aspects of it.. well, d not-so-lill row between father n son was a pre-reuisite seein dat Lucius is so mean n umm indifferent 2wards Draco.. am happy u njoyed readin it *smiles* Thanx a lot 4 ur wonde4ful review n i hope u like d rest of 2 story 2!!

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Wow. That is amazing writing.
I can't wait for the rest.

Author's Response: Dear Ravensdaughter,
Thanx so much for the lovely review!:)
Glad you liked it :)
The next (and last) chapter is awaiting validation now.
Hugs xxx

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I really like it. I can just imagine Ginny feeling that way.

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Please add another chapter! It's really good.

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It's great. It gives a reason why Draco wants to be nice. It makes him more relatable. Please come up with more.

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The beast fanfic story ever!!! I loved it!

Author's Response: Awe, that's so nice of you! Thanks tons!!

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