Oh my god. ='( Made me so touched.

Here I was, checking if my scenes were allowed. XD
Whoever the writer is, this made me cry! Kudos!

10.10

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Whoa. OK. Your stuff are just BLOODY BRILLIANT!
I really have a hard time writing about powers and high ranking stuff and you just do it without any problems. I love your chapters and will be waiting for your update soon. No need to rush though, I think life's already hard without even the pressure of not updating. ;) Added to my fave and rated a 10!

Fallen Angel

Author's Response: Thanks, lol. I'm glad you liked it. I don't know really, writing about powers and stuff just comes easy. Especially since I believe Harry should have some sort of extreme powers other than love in store for Voldemort in the real books.

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Hmm.. Ancient magic hmm? Interesting. :D

Author's Response: Yep. Thanks for reading.

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Hello. I am very much impressed of your story, madscientist. I really am. The way you write battlescenes is very exciting and nevertheless breathtaking with regards to your descriptions. The plot is very much innovative.

Besides from the often mispelt "Qudditch" to "Quiddich", I have no qualms whatsover. You must be one professional writer.

I gave you a rating of 10.10. If it could be higher, I would gladly give you triple or quadruple of the base number.

An avid reader, I would just like to point out attention to one of your stories. I am afraid I have seen plagarism of your work.

The story : Power of Hogwarts by HermioneMySnitch
>>>Chapter 31 : Marriage and Trouble

has its Qudditch scene from

Harry Potter and the Lions Of Gryffindor by madscientist
>>>Chapter 35 : It’s all about that Small Gold ball with wings

It is located in here in HPFF. I thought I should tell you about this since I know that plagarism is very much untolerable. I've taken action and told the admin about the problem but I suggest you alert them as well..

RATING : 10/10

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Hmm interesting..
Who will open the door?
Mum/Dad?Blaise?Gabrielle?Ginny?
HM..
Love this chapter!
And Draco plays the guitar!
*dreamy look*
I loff loff loff Draco.
and Mione.
And and YOU.
Love the way you write.
Love it that there were no typos whatsoever.
Love the fact that you made the first one of
these 'Hermione is Blaise's twin sister' and got off with it
And love the fact that you have an email list
Keep the great job up!

^.^


Author's Response: Wow, you love a lot! Lol. Well, I'll be updating soon, so eyes peeled!

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Your secret’s save with me --> Your secret’s safe with me

Other than that, I'm hooked!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll immediately correct it. And I;m glad you still like the story. Thanks for reading and leaving a review.

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whoa.. Hermione's jealous! ^_^

Author's Response: yeppy

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I love the story. Man I was late to see the mail... Anyways, I sent the image over for you to see. ^_^ Feel free to do whatever you want with it! ^_^

_sha

9/10 LENGTH!!! YOU KILLED ME WITH THE SHORTNESS!!!

Author's Response: Aww thanks Sha. :] I know I have a problem with the length. I sometimes run out of ideas. :/

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I like your story. :D

Would you like to have a new banner? I have a very nice vision of one just right for your story, you see? If you do want one, email me at charms29smc@yahoo.com.ph or charmed-arts0429@yahoo.com for me to send it to you.

Much Love!
Fallen Angel

**Oh, if you want to look at some of my creations, just search here in HPFF my name. TY!

Author's Response: Thankyou.

I looked at your banners, and they are great. I do want a new one, but I've already asked one of my friends to make me one. However, I'll definietely email you soon because I'd love to see what you think.

Thanks again!

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EH?!!?!??!?!?!?!


OMG! You HAVE to update...

Well, update as fast as you like... I'll be watching!

Author's Response: LLF.

I will update soon xxx.

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nice plot you have here...

Author's Response: Thanks.

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I've done the banner you've asked for this story. I sent it to your mail. I'm really sorry if I didn't make it as fast, I knda missed it.. I'm sooo SORRY!!! :((

Author's Response: it's alright! i'm glad you made it. it's beautiful.

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Ahh a very nice and original plot. Great job for thinking of this!

Certainly this story of yours is much exciting but your summary doesn't give it much justice. The story has a lot of potential, I like the part where your OC, Rebecca, acted quite truthfully and realistically. I for one wouldn't like a family heritage being sold like that, so I agree. I am sorry for making this review so short, I am very much impressed with your story that you've rendered me speechless.

I'm looking forward to your next chapters. Great job!



Author's Response: Thanks! I'll work on the summary... or maybe get it written by somebody else.
Thanks again!

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“Petrolous totalous” he said but just barely missing his target. He felt anger rise up in him as he saw it disappear behind trees. - quoted from Chapter 2 - Safety

Isn't this Petrificus Totalus or you just made it up? Other than that, this was once again a very well-written chapter. Kudos!

Author's Response: No that was a typo *lol*.

Well thanks!

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This is a very nice prolouge. You've given the readers something to look forward to as well : Harry and Hermione's relationship. This is one of the chapters you've written very well. Good job. No typos other. I absolutely like your beta.

Author's Response: Well in the already written chapters of the story there isn't to much H/HR to look forward to though in future chapters there will be again.

Thanks!

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Great chapter! Once again, you've outdone yourself! Coolio!

10.

Author's Response: lol, thanks. Glad you liked it.

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Oh I love your story! This was recommended to me by your dear cousin. I'll be looking forward to your next story!
NOTE : Eh.. hey? Want a banner? Just contact me at charmed_arts0429@yahoo.com and I'll be happy to make you one. ^_^

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Aww.. So sweet...

That was a weird comment considering I absolutely loathe Dudley Dursley in the book! ^_^

wonders never cease!

Author's Response: I know. I hate Dudley. He's a meanie =( Wonders never cease- of course! I never thought I would write a FanFiction about Dudley! Who would?

Thanks for your review!

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Harry and Ron!Yay! ^_^

Author's Response: lol... i know right! i felt they were being left out too much... and it can't be a Harry potter FanFic w/o the ever famous Harry Potter!...lol

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Wow.. amazing. Subtle and beautiful. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: thank you so much fallen!

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No words can easily describe this chapter. It's very well-written. Keep up the great work! Oh, and I love the way you update, much faster than the other stories I've encountered. I did not encounter any grammatical/typographical errors in this chapter.


Rating : 10

Author's Response: lol, thanks. I'm sure someone can find a fault, which I think some people have actually. A lot don't like what I have done with Harry. Anyway, thanks for reading and I will add the next in a moment.

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WAH! I'm so in-love with your story. Although I think I found a typo. Well, keep on rockin! You are so good! ^_^

Author's Response: haha I'm sure there's more than one typo in here ^_^ Thanks so much

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Wahh! I love you, woman! You are so damn brilliant! Keep up the good work, alright? ^_^ Although I spotted a lot of spellings wrong like the Daily Prophet became Daily Profit. Oh you get the drift! Still a ten for you!

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OMG OMG OMG! You HAVEEEEEE to update fast! The wait is killing meee!! I love the way you right! Outstanding!

Lol.

Rating : 10

Author's Response: Thanks. The next chapter is currently waiting.

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I cant help but feel excited! I wanna see how powerful Harry will be after the training! :D Keep on Rockin! \m/,

Author's Response: That will come in the battle. Hope you read on.

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