Good job!!! Loved it very nice ;) CANT WAIT 4 SEQUEL!Author's Response: Thank you for the review and the sweet compliment! My sequel: "Favorable Slavery 2" is now up for validation, so keep checking up to see if it has been posted yet! xoxo
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Awww nice ending. The story brought a tear to my eye really. Great writing! And the song matched the story very well. Good jobAuthor's Response: Thanks. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I'm sorry it made you cry, but I guess it is a sad story. Report Review
Sweet ending i loved it sad how hermiones parents dies but u should have made this into a story it would have been really good. Well great job i loved the story its got description and u gotta love "Hear me" Great jobAuthor's Response: Thanks heaps. I liked this fanfic, so I'm glad you did too. Report Review
um i just realized that whole is spelt wrong. But i love the story i r so good at writing!! its sweet its descriptive and it really impressed me great job u roock!!Author's Response: Oh! Thank You!
I changed it.
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OMG the ending is so sad i cant believe that Harry did that :( goood story i lyked it a few mistakes but very good i lyked it great work.Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I've finished the third and final chapter, I just haven't sent it in yet. It should be up soon, though!
Thanks for reviewing!
Cara Nicole Luvitz Report Review
This is a sad story. I love It though you have written Fleur perfectly. She looks beautfiul but she has her problems. This is kinda a angst cause Fleur won't really let Cedric into her heart. Well written write other Fleur/Cedric stories of you can.Author's Response: Thanks so much! I always saw that Fleur was steroetyped by other people, and always viewed in the same way, and it just seemed to me like she kind of receded behind her looks. I wanted to show the contrast between that and her real personality, and to show the conflict in her own heart. I'll try and write more, since its something people seem to like! Thanks! Report Review
this is a nice story. Keep writing Report Review
This is a good story keep up the good writing and pi can't WAIT for the next chappie.
seeyaAuthor's Response: thanks so much! Report Review
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