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Review #1, by Murder She WroteShe's Oh So Conniving.: Meeting The Vision.

1st February 2007:
I think it is quite nice, but I don't gather why Dumbledore is so keen on the two of them getting together. I think that would be the biggest mistake in the whole first chapter, but other than that I quite liked it. Plus why put a new student in as Head Girl, people are going to talk.

Author's Response: Aha, That you see, Can give you a clue of what is going to happen in later chapters. WHY would Dumbledore stick them together? Perhaps this was planned before they were born? You'll see in much later chapters ^^

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