Killer chapter. I am the smart allec. I need the Draco...but other than that, everyone was great. Well, can't wait until the next. Report Review
Wow, Herms looks like Kate Beckinsale...lol...good Job Seet (Doesn't Quinton call you that? or did he?) lol, had to bring back some school memory..Author's Response: Looks like you are having separation anxiety as much as I am??? Or are you... ne way. Thanx for reading my story once again also thanx for the help... I writing chapter ten... you won't believe what happens... or will you? Mystery is always fun... or is it? Shorty16 Report Review
ooooh, go Blaise, i want him too...i made him sound so hot,, so evil...Draco dang namiit you ahve competition. Seeta if you put me in your story and Blaise breaks up with Nallika, oh can i have Blaise pretty please, pretty plretty pretty please, here i will igbe you a ten twice. Author's Response: Goodness, calm yourself girl. Chill... I still need to find where Hermione fits in all of this remember, but don't worry you'll be paid back for your reward, don't worry, hun. Shorty16 Report Review
Very good, nicely done Seeta nicely done, lol, you should know something, the description of Blaise Zabini, oh never mine, just go see Van Helsing...lolAuthor's Response: Thanx, vikki and i would go see Van Helsing if I wasn't trapped inside my house for three weeks with nothing to do except write stories and play basketball, you know. Thanx for the review. Anyway, I'll go read your story now... Lost Innocense. Shorty16 Report Review
that was good, although i think for a baddie in Slytherin Pansy makes her look sentimental, she was bad in teh beggining but her words of truth to Draco we re a bit mellow dramatic ( i would know, i write alot of dramatic stuff) ....but your changing it and if that's the way you want it Sita than that's ok you don't have too
Author's Response: Thanx. I think I'll keep it, because then gettin rid of Nalika would be a bit harder and that might require another chapter and I already started the next one. That and us Indians are a bit mellow dramatic in itself. LOL! Well, gtg. Shorty16 Report Review
Pastel pink hooded sweatshirt with Miss Sixty Jeans, lol, that is what she wears for the PoA, lolAuthor's Response: I know that... my sister already pointed that out about a million times. You know you and her are more alike then you think... It just proves how excited I am for PoA. LOL! Shorty16 Report Review
P.S Herms has brown hair not dirty blonde
Author's Response: My sister said the same thing. I'm sorry. Goodness. But dirty blonde has some what likeness to brown, because emma's hair is a dirty blondish, brownish colored, isn't it? But if you want I can change that too I am pretty versitile. Shorty16 Report Review
EW DRACO HAS LONG HAIR!
SEEETA YOU ARTE LUCKY I AM YOUR FRIEND OTHER WISE I WOULD LEAVE YOU WITH LIKE AN 8!Author's Response: Vikki, calm down. I changed it for you. Okay, don't be a spazz. You sound like you are going to pop a blood vessel. He won't have long hair anymore. Well, don't get too stressed this summer viki. Lots of love for you and all the other reviewers. Shorty16 Report Review
omg, i swear to god this story is so amazing it reaches out and touches your heart and then breaks it. Please, read mine. I mean somone of your skills and writing standard i mean please, please take a look at my story. Author's Response: I will read your story this weekendm then I will review with my feedback. Trust me, I will. :-) Report Review
i am half way through this chapter, it's kind of funny, i don't think that i have ever heard Draco say the word "furrball" lol...it's really cute
er, it's a bit unrealistic, but it works for me. :)
it was kind of confusing, but it's really good so far.
this is really good so far, i have two new chapters up, just thought you should know, but i really like this story, so keep going...er yea, i am only in the second chapter though
dude, what happened to the other chapter? lol, omg i check this story every day, you are the best origianl writer on this thing. Report Review
i wonder how mnya more times i could review for this story...i reviewd like what 10 times and you reviewd my story what..3! that's just sad...lol....Author's Response: It's not that sad, I'm always looking for reviews. I reviewed your story because you wanted me too. And it's really good. I hope you continue. I like it a lot. It's called lost innocense, I think that's the way you spell it. Then again, spelling wasn't always my best subject. Shorty16 Report Review
okay, way un-Hermione, no mini skirt...keep in mind...can you really see Tom and Emma doing this at age 18 together? i mean don't you think you are overly changing Herms? i think i can change all of it for tom..*looks at Tom chained to her chair on boxers* lol...kidding..not a word.,..i had to make myself laugh, it was tempting to write that....lol...Want. To. Meet. Tom. Felton.....oh and as Jesse would say...Dude, noice...Author's Response: Hermione just put on the miniskirt to make Ron jealous. Then again sometimes things can make you drastically change. Who knows. Chill, I know that one day you might meet Tom Felton, even if he is old and a grandpa at some English retirement home or in Florida owning his own Fishery.... Shorty16 Report Review
NO YOU COPIED F,T,P D...by The CHOCOLATE HORSE...AHHHH....ok, i'll shut up...lol...i see your point, no botherr i can read more than one original...lol...Author's Response: Hello, I just submited the next chapter victoria. So read it. Then talk.
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Author's Response: Okay, now I get what you mean by one word. Anyway. Just get over it, I think he looks like a super freak, and you should get over it. God, I have been writing since I was in sixth grade and just because I changed my style of writing to please you tastes doesn't mean its just for you. This is a girl who goes to my school folks so I see her everyday, and she is very nice, but at sometimes very weird. Shorty16
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dude...shoot me....Author's Response: Omg, viki, get over it! God, my sister just jammed my finger. It's hurts really bad while typing. I hope you keep reading because I hope they are going to let the third chapter out too. I already submitted it so I'm just waiting.... Shorty16 Report Review
Shoot me Seeta, lol....omg i can't belive i got you hooked...check out my newest story...Lost Innocence....Author's Response: Do you think you left enough reviews Viki, I'm just writing what I usually write except with different names. God, I can't believe it. I just finished talking to u on the phone. Anyway, keep reading. And I'll take your advice on that Draco thing it's a good idea. Well gtg. Shorty16 Report Review
OMG no way! lol! that is hilarious! Report Review
LoL...no, truly, i have no clue what you are talking about....lol....well now that you just mention it...Yeah, i like the name Oberon, and black and Silver are my favourite colors, although it suits me though, after all, my character seems a bit...darkish...
It's pretty good, kind of choppy though, are you a first time writer? Here i know my opinion won't count because first opinions are never good, so i will give you a ten because people like to check out 5 star stories, you should check out mine....A Wall Between Us..Author's Response: I wouldn't say exactly that I'm a first time writer. But it is the first time that I ever actually put one of my stories on the internet. I don't really know what you mean by choppy. But I will try and make it less choppy. I would like to read your story. thanx for your review. and thanx for the edvice. Report Review
i thought she was blind? okey pokey...TEN!
Ah you have a point...but Sirius may not be dead...After all the spell the Bellatrix used to kill him (we're not sure) was red, yet Avada Kevadra is a green spell...Sirius just may be stunned..... Report Review
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