I loved this chapter, you did a brilliant job writing it. I can hardly wait to read about what happens next! Great job so far!Author's Response: Thanks sooo much! I'll try and update ASAP! Report Review
Great chapter. I have to say I am simply loving this story, and I love your writing style as well. I can hardly wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thanks Fleur_DelacourGinny_Weasly19 :) I'm really glad that you like my writing! I'll try and update ASAP! Thanks again for the review :D
Dixi x Report Review
Evil! Evil! Evil! Evil! That is all I have to say apart from... Great chapter! I absolutely cannot wait until the next one comes out!Author's Response: :D Mwhahah. I am rather evil, aren't I? Thank you so much!
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I have got to say...
I love this story! I have been completely obessed with it and am very much looking forward to the the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you very, very much! :) Report Review
Hi! I loved the chapter, thank you for updating! :) oh, and about the banner... Personally, I liked the last banner better, but that's just me! :) Anyways, keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thanks! And to be honest I think you're right...I'm going to remake it when I have time.
Thanks again! Report Review
Cliffhanger! I hate you! :) Jk. But I cannot wait for the next chapter to be posted!Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! :D Report Review
Awsome chapter! I loved it, I can't wait for the next one! :)Author's Response: Thanks very much! :D Report Review
Um... M, I think that you might want to fix this chapter. Don't use "u" instead of"you", and I would strongly suggest not using "i" instead of "I". But, other than that, it's good.
Oh, yeah, look who's telling who to update their story? You haven't updated "I think I'm in love" for like, four months!Author's Response: Haha thanks A, I was having tecnacal difficulties...
Yeah i know I tried to put the 2nd chapter up like forever ago but it didnt work so I'm gonna try again I'm just finishing it up cuz I didnt like the way I put it before. Haha, miss you!!!
Thanks for the review!!! M Report Review
Very funny. I can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thanks a lot! :) Report Review
Oh my god I can't believe you just ended it there! The suspense is killing me!Author's Response: whoooa, suspense? thats cool lol, now i know you really do like the story :)
the end if far from over though, as you will see when 'Resentment' comes up... which will be up asap... or whenever the waiting line lets me... either one of those two :)
thanks for your review!
xoxox Report Review
Are you going to update sometime soon? I'm dying to know what happens next! You must have a pretty bad case of writers block... I don't envy you in the slightest! I hate writers block.Author's Response: Ugh! I want to update sooo bad!
Unfortunately, my computer's hard drive crashed and now I can't get on it at all!
I ordered a new one, but it was the wrong one.
So I've got to send back this hard-drive and get a new one that will fit my computer.
Hopefully, that will be soon!
I'm sorry about all this, I will try to get my computer up and working as soon as possible!
Sierra Report Review
Hey M! Great story! I know I've already told u that about a million and two times but whatever, thought I'd brighten up your day.Author's Response: omg A im so bord! thanks for the reviews aaarrrgggaaa im so bord. see ya tomorrow. (i hope)
luv M Report Review
cest treis treis bon!
MAuthor's Response: Thanks M! Report Review
This is an awesome story, please update soon! Oh, and when you submit your chapters, do you use the paste as plain text button? If not you should start to use it because when most of the characters speak their words are in the next paragraph. But otherwise, it's great, keep up the good work!Author's Response: hey, thankyou so much, i'm glad you're enjoying it :)
oh, and thanks for the tip, i'll use it next time i update... but in the meantime, there's one up for validation, so a new chapter should be up soon!
xoxox Report Review
can't wait for the next chappie!Author's Response: Thanks, it should be out soon! Report Review
Argh! You are so evil! Please update soon!Author's Response: lol! I know, I'll try :) Report Review
Cool chapter please update soon! Oh and I'll make sure to check out your other story too.Author's Response: Thanks soo much! :) Report Review
It was pretty good, except I think it moved too fast. Good storyline, though. Report Review
That was funny please update soon!!!Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try Report Review
It was okay... I liked "Opening eyes" better... This one just kind of seemed really rushed, I guess. But it's your first one, so I'm sure the next one will be better!Author's Response: Thanks for reading it! I really appreciate it! Yeah..I'll try to slow the next one down a bit..Thanks again! XxSierraxX
It's pretty good... But I think it's moving a little too fast. It's a really good start, though. Report Review
Ha ha Very funny! I loved it can't wait for the next chapter! Report Review
I like it. It's pretty good so far, keep up the good work! Oh, and by the way, what is the actors name who is in your banner?Author's Response: Thanks, and the guy on the banner is Tom Welling Report Review
Really good story! Yeah I was a bit confused but I figured it out. Awesome song choice, too!Author's Response: Thanks! im really glad you liked it! its good that you figured it out sorry for the confusion!
~*TRINA*~ Report Review
Awesome. I luved it tho when I read chap. 10 I thought Hermione was deathly ill or something... Whatevs, it was great!Author's Response: awee. lol. thanks!! Report Review
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