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Review #1, by flyundergroundFeeling Gravity: Crass and Class

25th October 2009:
Sandy, this was adorable. I especially love the part about Mary cutting her hair because it's something I did recently. And I had been growing my hair for seventeen years. I'm still a little depressed about cutting it, actually.
ANYWAY, this is great. I completely understand how life gets in the way with writing and things like that. But I hope you'll update soon.
10/10!

Author's Response: Aww thank-you ^_^. With the hair I did the same thing, not recently but it was so hot that I asked my mom to cut it for me xD, my friends were not pleased haha. Now I'm growing it back and wishing that it would grow faster. I'm glad you liked the chapter, the next one just needs editing and thanks for you review ^_^.

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Review #2, by flyundergroundFeeling Gravity: Crowded rooms and sticky webs

10th December 2008:
He had been what he always was - agitating, and smug and a cocky, arrogant, attract-

Mary sat up eyes wide open in the dim lighting.

"No." She told herself firmly. "None of that." She wasnít going to deny it, Sirius Black was handsome, and it was a nearly impossible task to not stare at him when he was present but Mary was not attracted to him. It took more then good genes to trap a person in that sticky web and Mary was not an easy catch.


That was brilliant. I love how Mary considers Sirius now and I am really thankful that she didn't send him the letter. I feel really bad about what's happening with her father. I hope her family life improves throughout the story.

And I can't wait for her to return to school and see the interaction between Sirius and herself.

10/10 for sure!

Author's Response: Yay ^_^ so glad you liked it. And I am even more ecstatic to see you love a particular portion of the chapter. As for home life improving things have to get worst before they can get better right? Anyway new chapters should be coming soon, I am almost through with finals! Thanks again for the review!

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Review #3, by flyundergroundFeeling Gravity: Dark hair and darker eyes

26th November 2008:
Aah, I love this.
I think it's interesting how Sirius gave her his address.
Also, I like that Mary doesn't jump at the chance to mail him and thinks that he might have been mistaken.
I think it's fantastic that she thinks he wants an apology from her.
This is wonderful. Again, I cannot wait for the next chapter.
10/10!

Author's Response: Aw I'm so happy you're still reading ^_^ and reviewing and I am even more happy that you loved the chapter! Thanks for reading and I will try and add a next chapter as soon as I can but you know finals are coming up so it may take a while.

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Review #4, by flyundergroundFeeling Gravity: Cinnamon and Straw

20th November 2008:
I like this a lot.
I think that Mary is a really interesting character and I like the interactions (thus far) between Sirius and her.
Also, the tone is wonderful. I think you're really talented.
And you should really continue this.
I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank-you ^_^ I really appreciate your comments and the wonderful ego boost is most definitely going to keep me writing. I'll add as soon as I can.

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Review #5, by flyundergroundAre You Going to Put That Back?: What is this 'convenience store'?

13th November 2008:
This is fantastic.
I read a lot of Sirius/OC fics and this was just incredible. I think you got Sirius' character amazingly.
Also, I think the sense of humor is appropriate and wonderful.
I honestly cannot wait for the next chapter.
I can already tell that this is going to be one of those fics I'll reread in my spare time.
10/10!

Author's Response: oh wow, that's high praise. i love sirius to bits so i wanted to make sure he was believable. :)
thanks so much for your review!


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Review #6, by flyundergroundThe Last Farewell: The Last Farewell

30th December 2007:
You are just wonderfully wonderful and I heart this one shot to pieces.
Really, marvelous job, dearest.
*applauds*

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much, Yena! I'm really glad you liked it!
I love you to pieces, dear. *grins*

-hpfanx825


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Review #7, by flyundergroundWhat It Is To Burn: Keep It Simple

6th November 2007:
You are amazing.
Really, truly.
You are. *smiles*


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