"It's better than getting punished and not being able to go to the Hogsmeade camping trip in November! She was furious."

camping trip?!?!?!?!?! sounds like uber fun! =] you should have fun writing that. think of all the antics they could get up too =P

i LOVED the idea to use computers in Muggle Studies too. Genius! =D so funny too with the chatroom convos =]


"DO NOT CALL ME GINGER!"

that reminds me of my friend Ainsley =P she hates it when people call her that. Whereas my mate Jem doesnt care if people call her that =P


He noticed my distress and asked if I was on my period.

rofl! that made me lol =]


He's whimpering and sucking his thumb, with his arm around his legs.

lol! I thought of Sirius doing that is hilarious!


SIRxSNUFFLESxxSIRIUS: I feel like a little kid again. Just like the old days when I would sneak out of the house and spend the day exploring the computers at the public library ^_^ (before the librarians told me to watch out for the ‘bad sites’.)

SIRxSNUFFLESxxSIRIUS: I wasn’t my fault! I didn’t know! *cries*

roflmao! that was class!! =D

anyway, I'm going to stop quoting my fave bits now, coz we could be here a while =P

UPDATE SOON!

(plz?) =P

~CJ~
xXx

Author's Response: yes, camping trip!!! did you not remember in chapter five where lily says things that are going to happen in her sixth year? its mentioned there! =] and oh goodness, the antics... ;]

lol and when i thought of sirius huddling like that i laughed too! and awe of course i will update just for you ^_^ . trust me keep quoting it, i love it when people do that!! =D

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THAT WAS BRILLIANT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Wow, I loved it so much! I'm just itching to know what's going to happen next!

XD

Author's Response: Itching, eh? lol, thanks so much! Glad you liked! hugs!

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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I LOVED IT!

oh, man! You need to update this ASAP!!!

Huh.now I know how those poor people that have to deal with my cliffies feel. it doesnt fell too gd actually...

Anyway, great chapter (10/10, as always!). I love the idea of George/Stacey. It's so cute! *gushes*

~CJ~
xxx

Author's Response: :)
thanks cayce
Rhona xx

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aw! So cute!

i LOVE the way you write this, it kicks ass. XD Please try and update sooner next time!! I was literally dying inside when you didn't update quicker last time!!

~CJ~
xxx

Author's Response: Aww, I totally didn't even take as long as i usually do to update. :( buttt glad you like this!!

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lol. love the last sentence. =]

Very good, Rhona. Plz try and update faster next time tho. I can't handle another wait like that (although I'm one to talk, aren't I? With my track record. lol)

cya 2moz, hun!

~CJ~
x

10/10!

Author's Response: psh I should try and update quicker? lol jkjk, you're right... still three letters - SLL =P

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Bloody good, Rhona - as always! =D

Please update as quickly as you have done this time. I can't stand to wait (even though you've told me what's gonna happen in the rest of this and what's gonna happen in the sequel too). =]

c ya 2moz at skool, hun. - don't forget, non-uniform day 2moz!!!
~CJ~
x

10/10!

Author's Response: merci ma copine

did I tell you what's going to happen in the sequel?
i can't have, cuz even I dont know yet haha. plus i'm sure you dont know everything that's going to happen here :)

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hey, just noticed the banner comment in your summary.

I've only just got a graphics program, so I'm no good at banners yet, but my friend TrueLoveStoriesNeverEnd is REALLY good.

Here's her website URL: www.freewebs.com/retroromantic/

fill out and submit the form on the requests page and don't forget to leave her your email address - otherwise she has no way of getting the banner to you.
There's also a bit where you can check out previous requests che's made so you can see how gd she is.

Anyway, bubbi!
~CJ~
xox

Author's Response: WOW! Thanks SOOOO much! I was starting to get really jealous of all the stories that did have banners =P. I'll check out your friend's website. Thanks again!

xxJINX

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you need to change the credit notice for your banner. it's still set as Vicki. it needs to be TrueLoveStoriesNeverEnd now, as she made you the new banner. ok?

Sorry, but she's my friend and I checked this out and saw the credit thing was wrong. =]

bye
~CJ~
xxx

Author's Response: I totally didn't catch that - thanks! I'll change it right away. I didn't pay any attention to that at all, and now I feel rotten. My apologies!

GiZMo

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gd chapter, but I'm being kicked off the computer now! =[ I'll read the rest tomorrow.

But, one thing. . .

James was a Chaser, not a Seeker. They made a mistake in the first film. If you go onto hplexicon you'll see that James is a Chaser. Sorry to have ruined that!

anyway, bubbi!

~CJ~
xxx

10/10!

Author's Response: yup i didn't realise that, but thanks for reviewin anyways

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Great story. UPDATE SOON!

plz. XD

I'm now addicted to this. Right, this only leaves Death Curse, Sparrow Black and Great Revenge for me to read. will get on it soon.

c u at school 2moz! =]

~CJ~

x

Author's Response: lol thanks =]
oh btw
finally finished plannin out this story
so there'll be 39 chpts in total
unless i come up wif a really gd idea =]
~Rhona~

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UPDATE ASAP!

plz. lol =]

plz, plz, plz, plz, plz, plz (u no i don't say plz much, so come on!)

hehehe =]

am a lil bit hyper.

c ya at school!

~CJ~

10/10 as always! XD

Author's Response: oh right jst realised i answered the SM review with the answer for THIS review. yeah SM wont have 39 chpts [probably...] its ILL that will have 39 chpts =]
~Rhona~

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AW! HAHAHAHAHAHA! Jenni is either gonna strangle you or love you, I don't know which! =D

It's so sweet tho!

Aw, congrats on another fabby chapter!

luv ya!!
~CJ~
x

Author's Response: cheers =]
frankly i hope she kills me, coz to quite honest the idea of a lessie Jem kinda scares me =P
~Rhona~

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Hey! You better keep your promise! =D Or I will kill you 2moro at school.

And I mean it!

Um, anyway, loved the chapter (even though I was the only person apart from u who knew it was Snape all along! =] I feel special!!)

You better update!

Luv ya! =D
~CJ~
x

Author's Response: lol thnks CJ =]
n i have kept ma promise!
~Rhona~

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Gosh, gd fic! XD

and you know who CJ is! It's me! I mean, u read ma stories!!! =] I was nagging Rhona (TrueLoveStoriesNeverEnd) on msn to update cause I know wats happening (it was me who gave her some ideas - not the Remus part tho...) and I felt terrible for u guys. So I nagged and nagged and it payed off! =D

And, your welcome!!!

~CJ~
x

Author's Response: Thanks :)

I do? I guess I just didn't know your name :) LOL, depend on me to forget stuff. And thanks again! Can't handle the suspense!

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heeheee! I know wat's going on. . . Yeah, and you proba wouldn't have updated for another few days before updating, 'cause ur evil that way! XD

Update soon!

~CJ~
x

Author's Response: fair nuff =p
ta for the review!
~Rhona~

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OMG! Drama! And I LOVE it! =D

Wow, update ASAP!

I feel really bad for Remus. . . He's my fave marauder! =] Sirius is my 2nd fave, but not right now he's not. . . How could he do that to Remus!!! I feel like slapping him - no, scratch that, I'm gonna break every bone in his body!!! And some! lol, I'm a little strange, huh? XD But where's the fun in being normal?

10/10!

~CJ~
x

Author's Response: remus is my most favorite. i made a remus lupin shirt for the book seven release! if i could marry him, i would. xD sirius is my second favorite, as well... that's why it hurts sometimes for me to write this! but... it does seem like typical sirius, doesn't it. :/

anyway, normal is totally overrated. :D

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Excellent (as always!) =]

And hahahahahahaha to evryone else cause I know what's going to happen. . . hehehe =D

20/10! (=])

~CJ~

P.S. Update Soon!

Author's Response: 20/10?
yaldy!
lol
ty CJ
~Rhona~

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lol, aw so cute! =]

But, where is Peter in all this? He hasn't had a single mention! Not that I like Peter, or anything, it's just strange.

Anyway, update ASAP! (plz?)

~CJ~
x

10/10

Author's Response: Well, when I write stories focused on a specific ship or just specific characters in general, I don't use SO very many outside characters... it gets a little confusing for myself... because I'm one-track like that. xD

Anyway, in chapter five there is a tiny mention of him... if that makes it any better...

And speaking of chapter 5, I just sent it in for validation! Sadly, the wait is 6 days. Ugh.

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Hey, thanks for letting me know that I hadn't put the notice up. I seriously thought I'd put it in my authors notes, but obv not =] I hope there's no hard feelings. Guitar Girl is one of my favourite books too. I put the ntoice up. =]

c ya!
~CJ~

PS. Love the story so far!!! =]

Author's Response: Thank You =) I didn't want to have to report the story, because you ARE doing a good job re-writing it like harry potter--
But Yah, thanks =)

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Just one problem. James was a Chaser, not a Seeker. I know I didn't believe it at first either. Bbut go onto hplexicon.com and u'll see for urself.

Apart from that, well done! You've got something special here! =]

~CJ~

Author's Response: Oh I didn't know that, thanks. Thank you!

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Hello!!! I finally read it! Hooray! =P

Um, brill chapter (as always). =] I think it would be so funny if Remus and Lily got stuck under the mistletoe, but no one has to see them. Unless Lauren or Sirius walk in, something like that. it would be sad to make it James... =]

anyway, bubbi!

~CJ~
x

Author's Response: About time lol
thanks =]
~Rhona~

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Um, hey, thnx for reviewing me. I have added this to my faces although I haven't read it yet. I will though, don't worry. I'm just busy at the mo.

The reason I reviewed was so that I could tell you that a friend of mine could make you a banner. It's TrueLoveStoriesNeverEnd (the one who made the banner for my story). Go to her page and follow the link to her website, then click on HPFF Requests.

anyway, c ya! and thnx again!

~CJ~
xxx

Author's Response: Wow thanks!!! I just asked. I really hope that she will. I have absolutely no talent in banner making. It's quite sad actually. LOL

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Oh wow! This is amazing! I'm almost in tears! Beautiful! *claps and wipes tears from eyes* Bravo!!!

chapter 19 reminds me of the song "Cancer" by My Chemical Romance. If you haven't heard it, give it a listen and you'll see what I mean.

10/10!

~CJ~
x

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yay! I'm so glad you liked it.

I've never heard it before, or heard of it. I like MCR, but I've just never listened to that song. I've gotta go find it now! I wonder if they have it on iTunes...

Thank you very much! I'm so glad you liked it!

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LALALALALALALALA! Even though Ive read this already I'd just like to say...
Bravo! Um, update ASAP!

Your friend,
~CJ~
x

PS. I updated Brotherly Hate!!! I'm on an updating spree! (Let's just see how long it lasts. Not long probs. ^_-)

Author's Response: thanks =]
lol i guess it'll last about 2 days then you'll be away for 4 months again.
will update soon
starting a new story actually =]
~Rhona~

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Brill, Rho!! Update soon please!

I like the whole thing with Remus liking Lily, makes you wonder what's going to happen with that next.

And also, damn you! You have more reviews than SLL!!! Oh well, I'm updating that soon!!! I'll beat you! ^_^

~CJ~
xx



Author's Response: Not a contest Cayce =P

thanks for the review, I'll be updating soon - i'm updating Slytherin Mudblood the now.
~Rhona~

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