That was AMAZING!! Your stories have such detail that I've never seen an author put into their work before. It makes a beautiful (if not sometimes dark) world that I feel I am actually IN, not just reading about. 10 out of 10 for you!

Author's Response: Wow, DropDeadandDie (I love the penname by the way) thank you so much for the feedback on the level of detail! I love writing with detail, but tend to go overboard sometimes. lol It makes it really worthwhile to know that its not too much all of the time though, but instead helps the reader get into the story. Thank you for that! :)

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You're story is so flippin' cool!! I love it!! You are, by far, my favorite writer on HPFF, just because your story is so believable. You get me wrapped up in it, and I don't want to stop reading. Please get the next part out soon!!

Author's Response: Hey DropdeadANDDIE! Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying my story so far and I'm definetely glad to think that one of my readers think all these words are actually believable. The next part will be out around June. It needs a lot of revision on some parts. Mind you, the next chapter is the longest one I've written by far (around 8000 words or so, give or take.) I'm sure you have other favorite writers out in the HPFF community aside from me ^^;

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