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Review #1, by HecatemusThe Time it All Began: The Cherry Blossom Twig

3rd March 2006:
I think that this story has a lot of potential. After reading these chapters, I found myself drawn into the world that you painted. I have a few qualms about Harry being Related to Gryffindor though, and this plot screams that he is a descendant of Godric's brother, but maybe i'm reading into this too much. I'm guessing that you will have some chapters that follow Godric in Harry's body though.... Maybe. Even though this is a really good read, I can see potential for a lot more. description, background, plot lines, and the like. also, you could have set up the music box a little better, and introduced it over a few chapters to give the impression of progression. Really good read though, keep up the good work. sorry if this sounds too critical, I really think that this is a good story.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!! :D

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