That was amazing! You wrote it so perfectly. I miss fics like this, it was beautifully written as well. I gave you a 10/10 for this, it was great. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is probably one of my favourite fics I've written, so your praise is wonderful to read. Thanks once again, especially for the 10/10, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Very cute. I can't give any advice on his accent since I don't how to do it that well myself but I think you did good. I liked it all in all.

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That was amazing! I wish you would continue this as some sort of story, it would be great. You had me hanging onto every word, it was really well written. Am I right in guessing that this idea came from phantom of the opera? Hmm without a reflection I kind of had the thought he was a vampire. I could guess all day who the masked man was but alas I doubt I'd get it right. I would say Eric as he is the phantom in the movie but it's probably a harry potter character. Excellent job :) 10/10

Author's Response: Wow! *blushes* I'm glad you enjoyed it! The idea of the masked man only came from Phantom of the Opera, and in regards to the reflection, he wasn't a vampire but it sort of made Hermione realise that she was in a fantasy and that everything couldn't be perfect in it. The man is a Harry Potter character, but you can keep guessing. Hehe. Thanks for your wonderful comments!!

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This was very interesting and well done. I love seeing what people come up with for my challenges and this was great. Congrats on a excellent job for your first challenge. ~~LadyOfShadows(fourm name)~~

Author's Response: Thank You!!! Some of this was hard for me to write but it was well worth it. Like I said in the Author Notes... I sooo loved this challenge, Thank you for posting it!!!

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Great job! Glad you took up my challenge, you did a wonderful job. :)

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Hey there. I really like this because it showed a whole new side to Harry's aunt and you wrote it nicely. Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: thanks!!!

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This is really interesting so far. I hope to read more.

Author's Response: There is another chapter written and on the way! Thanks for the support! ~DIR

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Interesting so far. I'll defintly keep reading.

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Well..it's nice and all but you should use your own dialouge(sp?) you're just using what they said in the movie and putting in the other's names and to me that just isn't that...ehh...good i guess the word is. You should have the phantom of the opera ideas in mind, not writing them nearly word for word and inserting the characters you're using's name's. I'm not trying to sound rude but that's just what I think.

Author's Response: I'm sorry you feel that way. Other's like it.

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