omg-omg-omg That was wonderful! Loved it completly. Pefect ending to a one-shot. Hope you write more, and love the banner too. Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm really glad that you like it! (And the banner. XD) Report Review
Btw its the -left- arm that the Dark Mark is put on.
But I do like your story so far. GoodJobAuthor's Response: I'll go fix it, thank you. Report Review
Wow...That Becky is one brave little girl. This Chapter is really, really awesome, very well done. Hermione though, she worries me. That poor girl goes through a LOT. Hope things get better for her soon. Happy writing...
LoveAsAlways--OrionAuthor's Response: I know; Becky is very brave. Almost too brave. :P And aww, I know that as well; I almost feel bad for everything I'm making Hermione go through! Bad me, bad me! *bangs head in the wall Dobby-style* lol! :P Thanks for your review. :) Report Review
YAY! Again you (and your story) are AWESOME! They finaly LOVE eachother! WHOOT! Love it--update soon. Report Review
This story is amazing! I have read my fill of F.F. but this story makes my stomach flip in odd ways. I was most upset when Hermione lost their baby. You gave the Dark Side and Lord Voldemort a new light (which I think it deeply deserved) The relationship between Narcissa and Hermione is also magnificent! In this story you actualy see their hate blosom into 'love' and that is a difficult task. ( I also write Dramione stories so...) Wonderful work. PLEASE udate soon! Report Review
Absolutly B-e-a-utiful! Poor Hermione though, drama-drama-drama! You're an excellent writer. Update soon!
LoveAsAlways--OrionAuthor's Response: Yeah, drama is the right word... and this is only the beginning! ;) I will update asap Report Review
LOVE IT!!! The suspense killed me. *high fives and hugs* Update soon!
LoveAsAlways--OrionAuthor's Response: Oh, sorry I killed you. lol! :P Glad you loved it though! *hugs back* I will update asap Report Review
Amazing story! Tears are always a plus! Keep writing you're awesome.Author's Response: Lol, thanks for the review! Hehe, I love making people cry :p I'm glad you liked it~ ~Cat Report Review
It's awesome! pLeAsE continue!! Author's Response: Why, thank you! I'm glad to hear you liked it! I'm putting chapter two in to be validated right now! Report Review
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