{reviewid: 1028342, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
19th June 2006:
Omigawd! I luuurv this story!
P.S. If I did not already tell you this, this is future_lily
Author's Response: I'm happy you like it! and yes, you already told me, but I don't mind!
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{reviewid: 1025666, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
17th June 2006:
Wow! This is aw4esome! Totally goin into the faves!
P.S. this is future_lily
Author's Response: Thanks!!! =D
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{reviewid: 1024240, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
15th June 2006:
AWESOME!! I LUUURV IT!! Inga does to......
Author's Response: uh, thanks. tell inga i said hi. thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1010018, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
3rd June 2006:
Wow! Really dark, and rather depressing, especially the fact of how heartless Draco is.....I did not understand why he kissed her forehead....But otherwise it was good...
Author's Response: Depressing is my specialty, sad isn't it? And Draco kissing is forehead is just something I felt I should add. To show that he has a heart, and can be conpassionate, but is still set on getting what he wants. Thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1009988, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
3rd June 2006:
Really good! You spelled "pyjamas" wrong though, it is pajamas...just saying...Awesome chapter though
P.S. if I have not already told you this: This is future_lily
Author's Response: Well, hello there, future_lily! :) as for the "pyjamas" thing, well, the tool that's supposed to correct spelling mistakes on Microsoft Word hadn't underlined it, so I thought it was ok... And I actually think it can be written that way, but I'll check it up! thanks for the reviews!
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{reviewid: 1009959, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
3rd June 2006:
Wow! This is really good! I enjoyed it a lot!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you did, and I hope you'll enjoy the following chapters!
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{reviewid: 1009926, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
3rd June 2006:
Wow! Realy good! Some mistakes though:
"...just before their opponent kill them.” should probably be kills them, There waas a couple more, I think, but I can't find them, so I would advise you to read through the chapter. Otherwise, highly entertaining and interesting!
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out... as soon as I'm really on holiday, I'll work on the edition... And I'm going to correct that in the meantime! I'm glad you liked it otherwise.
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{reviewid: 1004418, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
29th May 2006:
Once again, awesome job! Highly interesting!
Author's Response: Thankie, thankie! I LURVE interesting. . . interesting is good--haha THANKS!!!!!
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{reviewid: 1004416, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
29th May 2006:
OMG!! This is really good! I enjoyed it a lot!
P.S. This is future_lily
Author's Response: Thanks so much, future_lily! I'm glad you liked it, really! I'm glad you found this actually--I went looking for it after endless pages of F A N F I C T I O N, and it was impossible--so how you came across this (unless you are from the forums) is practically a miracle! Thanks! Thank SO much!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 998003, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
24th May 2006:
awesome job! Really cool! I like it!
P.S. this is future_lily!
Author's Response: Thankyou!! :D I have a new one up now too!!
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{reviewid: 995797, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
22nd May 2006:
oh tear! i feel bad for him!!
Author's Response: yeah, me too. =(
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{reviewid: 988731, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
15th May 2006:
the spelling didnt bother me.....really good chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much for reviewing all of the chapters! ~Sporky&Loony
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{reviewid: 988710, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
15th May 2006:
really good! i like it!
Author's Response: Thanks, we like it too! ~Sporky&Loony
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{reviewid: 988702, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
15th May 2006:
ummm... i think that remus' eyes are a chocolatey brown...idk...good chappie!
Author's Response: If that's the case, his eyes are probably like that because of all the chocolate he eats, lol. ~Sporky&Loony
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{reviewid: 988691, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
15th May 2006:
i think that sirius/laura should happen....but that is just me... good chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for answering the question. ~Sporky&Loony
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{reviewid: 988674, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
15th May 2006:
wow! you guys are really good!
Author's Response: Again, thank you very much! ~Sporky&Loony
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{reviewid: 988650, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
15th May 2006:
really good....on to nxt chappie!
Author's Response: :D
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{reviewid: 988638, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
15th May 2006:
hahahaha! that is really good!
Author's Response: Thanks! ~Sporky&Loony
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{reviewid: 988629, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
15th May 2006:
Hahaha! you are a really good writer!
Author's Response: Why thank you :) ~Sporky&Loony
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{reviewid: 988610, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
15th May 2006:
Oh hahaha! that is soooo funny! I don't think guys would get that...but it is still halairius! (i know i spelled it wrong...)
Author's Response: Heh. Remus has a time of the month... ~Sporky&Loony
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{reviewid: 988600, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
15th May 2006:
really good! i lurv it! on to nxt chappie!
Author's Response: ^_^ ~Sporky&Loony
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{reviewid: 988594, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
15th May 2006:
really good! I am really enjoying this story!
Author's Response: Haha, we're glad. ~Sporky&Loony
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{reviewid: 988582, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
15th May 2006:
wow! this is really good! I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! ~Sporky&Loony
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{reviewid: 988554, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
15th May 2006:
wow! this is really good!
P.S. this is future_lily
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it..=)
Mags
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{reviewid: 987452, reviewer: 'ronlover13'}
14th May 2006:
that is really good!
Author's Response: *laughs* The same you said in the previous chapter! But thanx anyway.
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