{reviewid: 1508903, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
11th July 2007:
Poor Petunia. lol. Good job
Author's Response: Haha, poor Petunia, I know.
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{reviewid: 1506480, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
10th July 2007:
Poor Fred! Poor George! Poor Molly! Good story =)
Author's Response: Aww thanks!! =) x x x
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{reviewid: 1478731, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
24th June 2007:
Good Job!! But there's something I would like to point out. The Evans weren't pureblood, they were muggles. Lily was muggleborn.
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{reviewid: 1478673, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
24th June 2007:
This one is funny. Good Job!
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 1291554, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
3rd February 2007:
Awesome. Good job!!
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{reviewid: 1285976, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
30th January 2007:
Rating: 10/10. I would give it more if I could. Really! It rocks. I love it so much!! I'll review again after I finish reading it. I know you wrote a sequel, but could you please write more??? Like 5 more parts until she finishes Hogwarts??~everdreams
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{reviewid: 1110118, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
19th August 2006:
Wow! Really good story
Author's Response: Glad you liked it everdreams. Thanks for reviewing. I really appreciate it.
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{reviewid: 1108810, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
18th August 2006:
Very good. I wonder what was inside the room
Author's Response: thank you ^.^ next chapter will be up soon...
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{reviewid: 1101240, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
12th August 2006:
Another excellent story. Good job
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{reviewid: 1099761, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
11th August 2006:
Very good story. Really enjoyed it
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{reviewid: 1092412, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
5th August 2006:
Great story
Voldemort's so mean!! Grrrr!>:(
~everdreams
Author's Response: That's the great thing about him, isn't it? I'm glad you liked it!
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{reviewid: 1092407, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
5th August 2006:
Good story. I wonder why LV wants the potion so bad. Keep writing. And BTW chapters 5 and 6 of my story is now up.
~everdreams
Author's Response: He wants the potion because it will make him a lot stronger (chapter 1, I think?). The question is of course, will he get it? ;) Thanks so much for your review! I'll get to your story, don't worry. It might take another week or two (I'm on holidays), but I'll read it. :)
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{reviewid: 1092400, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
5th August 2006:
Good story. But it's really short and it seems like you're hurrying so much. For example you should have written a part of the kids' conversation and don't use reported speech all the time.
Hope that helps
~everdreams
Author's Response: Thanx I have only written mabey five short stories in my life so mabey i will slow down. Thanx for the help! : )
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{reviewid: 1091494, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
4th August 2006:
Oops. Forget to tell you something.
There were some mistakes in the story that I'd like to point out:
In Michael's letter to Liz, he said
Reply ASAP
ASAP is considered an abbreviation of the internet languages which can't be used in letters.
Second. In the book Liz was reading.
It said that Harry knew that Sirius was his godfather when he was 16.
Didn't he know that when he was 13?
Third. The abbreviation of microphone is mic not mike.
Hope that helps and I hope that I'm not mistaken.
Have a nice day :)
~everdreams
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{reviewid: 1091480, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
4th August 2006:
Excellent. Rating 10/10. Good job. Can you please contact me at the email in my page because there's a few things I want to ask you?
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{reviewid: 1090000, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
3rd August 2006:
Excellent story!! Rateing 10/10. I would give you much more than that if it was possible. Great job.
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{reviewid: 1088038, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
2nd August 2006:
Excellent! Rating 10/10. Haha. Very funny. This story goes to one of my favourites!
Good job.
~everdreams
Author's Response: Wow thanks so much! And thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1088036, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
2nd August 2006:
Haha. Nice one.
Author's Response: :D
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{reviewid: 1086480, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
1st August 2006:
Very good chapter. Petunia is a witch? A good witch? great. Please post the next chapter ASAP
Author's Response: thnx
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{reviewid: 1086468, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
1st August 2006:
Good chapter but sad. Very sad. Keep writing!
Author's Response: thnx
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{reviewid: 1086461, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
1st August 2006:
Poor Damien. Voldemort's so cruel. Grrr!!
Good one
Author's Response: thnx
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{reviewid: 1086444, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
1st August 2006:
Nice chapter!!
Author's Response: thnx
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{reviewid: 1086432, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
1st August 2006:
Very good chapter!!
Author's Response: thnx
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{reviewid: 1086421, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
1st August 2006:
Good story
Author's Response: thnx
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{reviewid: 1086411, reviewer: 'everdreams'}
1st August 2006:
Nice story. I'm glad it was all a dream
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