Wow, great chapter. Nice to get a little shock once in a while. Keep up the good work :D
Lori xxxAuthor's Response: Thanks, I like to keep that edge. Anyway, keep reading!
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Ooo! Next chapter please! Please please please!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
*Laughs* I love this chapter!!!!!
"‘But why I froze, not one among them knows,’ Lily sang sweetly"
Let me take a wild guess and say this is a line from my fave Buffy ep, Once more with feeling. *Smiles* Great chapter hun, keep writing! lol.
Lori xxxAuthor's Response: err...........thanks...? yeah the line was from buffy omwf, its a fav ep of mine as well!
im definitely gonna keep writing, dont worry about that! thanks for reviewing, naioka1992 - xoxo Report Review
*frowns* I'm not sure if you've already us in one of your notes but I do believe you have based this story on a prgram called Tru calling. I should know because that was my fave program after Buffy (The vampire slayer) ended. *Smiles* It's good but I could help but laugh at Lily trying to be Eliza Dushku lol. But anyway, very... amusing. Keep writing. And good job.
Lori xxxAuthor's Response: hehe, im glad you enjoy it. yeah, i know its based on tru calling - its my fav after buffy ended too!
good to see we have something in common, really glad you enjoyed it!! thanks for reading, naioka1992 - xoxo Report Review
OMG, love this chapter! I love all of them! Poor Lily. *Snickers* Sexy James... Please please write more! Good job!
Lori xxxAuthor's Response: lol I know 'sexy james' can't live without him. thanks for your lovely review Report Review
Oh well done! This is your first fanfic right? I remember my first fan fic and it was a mess. Just keep writing the way you are and it will be perfect. great job.
Lori xxxAuthor's Response: Thank you! Yes, this is my first fanfic. I hope to update this week so keep an eye out. Report Review
I'm sorry I just don't like this story. At first when Lily was all punk it was wierd but I thought you'd pull through. Now Lily is really clingy and it's just not in charactor. I don't like it at all. I know it's harsh but I've got to say it. I'm sorry if I have upset you in anyway. But this story seems like it's been written but a six year old. Once again, I'm sorry but it just had to be said. I do hope you improve soon.Author's Response: Hey, I don't like you. I don't rank on ur stories, not like i'd read them. but if i did i wouldn't put em down. I love constructive critisizm but nt like this. So thank you for not reading. I don't like you!!!! Report Review
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