This is pure love!! I adore every character you have made! I love Pippa and Cassie, and Al and well everyone. Everyone is unique and special! its awesome.Author's Response: Heya :) I'm so glad you like the story, it means a lot to me. I'm glad you like the characters too, I have so much fun creating them! So it makes me really happy that you like them all even though they aren't the most likeable people at times :P Thanks so much for the review, Ill try to update soon and I hope you have a great day. X Report Review
This is amazing. I love Tom. And I think him and Rose could have an interesting relationship. Can't wait for more. Report Review
I love this. Two of my favorite things combines. Can't wait for the next chapter. Amazing job.Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I love Sailor Moon as well, so writing about this AND Harry Potter...its a dream come true. Hahahaha. I've always thought about doing it...but until now I finally got the plot going. I'll update asap! :D Report Review
I love this story and I would love to see a sequel!!!Author's Response:
Thank you so much and ahah, i've actually decided but i'm not telling which though ;) I put myself in candices place, in her mind and decided what would a girl like her do ? then i had my answer (: Report Review
So I found this story about I don't know at 7 last night and it is now 1:39 in the morning. I have read every chapter and have fallen in love with this whole story. Please update soon, I think I shall die if you don't. I was laughing and crying and truly enjoying the characters that you created and the ones that you just portrayed and gave a personality too. Please, please update soon, I think I shall kiss you if you do. Okay, I totally wont because that would be creepy. I think Nellie as rubbed off on me. I love her. I love Izzie. I love them all. oh, and I love Sirius, because I have been in love with him since I first read about him in the third book. But you made me fall in love all over again. Yup, I sound like a creep.
Oh well, love this story. Its on my top favorites. Can't wait for the next chapter.Author's Response: Wow! That is so amazing to hear. Haha, don't worry! I'm working on the next chapter! I'm so glad you like the characters that live inside my head, I'm rather of a fan of them myself. Haha, you make me giggle! And I'm so glad you love them all. Haha, yes, me too! So you're in the same boat as me. Haha! I'm just so glad you enjoyed the story and I'll try to update soon! Thank you so much for the review.
xxx Report Review
I love this more than you could possible know.
I cant wait for the next chapter.
This is amazing. Report Review
Its over. Awe, I loved this story so much. I'm glad for the happy ending. It was amazing story. I loved it.Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for taking time to review. --Jenna Report Review
I love these two. I'm so sad to see it end. Fred and Dixie are my favorite of all time couple on this site. Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed this!
This review has made me smile so much! It's made me so flattered that they're your favorite couple.
The last chapter is already in the queue. Report Review
I love this! This piece was breathtaking and very emotional.
Wonderful job. Keep up the amazing work.
MariaAuthor's Response: Thank you so much. :D
I'm glad that you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing! --Jenna Report Review
Ahh, this is love.
I'm so excited.
This is amazing,
and I adore Dixie.
She is my favorite.Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter. And Dixie! I love her, I'm over the moon that you do too. Report Review
“Hang a sock on the door or something!” - James.
Ahh, this is just epic. I love it. i couldn't stop laughing.
James would be the one to walk in on them. Aww, this is just amazing. Can't wait for the next update.Author's Response: Everyone really loves that line. :D haha. Report Review
I love this!
This is amazing. Its going under favorites.Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it and I appreciate your taking time to review. :D --Jenna Report Review
I love this chapter! It is wonderful! And everyone knows now.
I'm so happy, I could do the happy dance. hehe.
I like how James is protective and mad that she did the trick and could have gotten hurt.
It was adorable.
I love it.
Aww, I feel bad for Dixie. I love her and I love Fred. I don't want them fighting.
I would have to say I'm on team Freddy! I just love him.
I can't wait for Lily to be back in the story. She is one of my favorites.
wonderful job as always,
MariaAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! Yeppers, everyone knows. I didn't think that it would take too long for the school to figure out that THE James Potter has a girlfriend :P Especially now that it's Charisma.
I would love to see your happy dance.
I thought that James couldn't be anything but protective.
Dixie and Fred are the opposite in their personalities, James and Charisma are too stubborn for each other, where as Dixie is simply a raging lunatic and Freddy is laid back.
TEAM FREDDY! I am a torn team between Freddy and Drew :D
Lily will be back in, I couldn't leave her out for long! Thanks for the review. I will update soon! Report Review
I like Lorcan. I don't know but Holden just rubs me the wrong way. I don't like. I just, don't know how to explain it, but he doesn't give me any good vibs, and he is wrong for Dom.
I love your story! I can't wait for the ending and the sequal.Author's Response: Everybody is switching back to Lorcan this chapter. Thank you! Report Review
I love it.
Even if James is disappointed in Chic, there comes a moment when you have to stand up for yourself and stop getting crap from someone who things they are better then you.
Evie has nothing on Chic, though.
Chic is the best.
I like the maybe Drew and Polly thing? Do I forsee something or was there something happening and I missed it?
Kyle still cares even if he doesn't want to admit it. He wouldn't have been there if he didn't. As does Elle.
I love Dixie. I want a friend like her.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
MariaAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review, Maria. I'm glad that you love this one. :P
You're totally right, James always expects the best from his friends. he can always see the good in other people, even when they can't see it themselves. it was a quality that I had written in James from the beginning. He can see all that his friends could be.
Evie should just go and get in a hole in the ground and stay there. Chic is a much better person than her. I'm glad that you like her :P
About the Drew and Polly thing, Polly is a second year and Drew is a sixth, I don't think that everybody would have liked it. I had considered making Polly a fifth, but I thought it would have been a little odd if everyone on the Quidditch Team was paired up with each other.
You're totally right about Kyle to - you're the insight guru! - and Elle, they do still care. They just felt outcast.
Dixie is awesome, in the beginning of the story she was only going to be a minor character, but then I realised just how much I could develop her and I ran with it - hence the sequel.
I will update soon. Thanks again for the review. Report Review
I love it. it was amazing.
And today is my birthday, so when I got on to check, it was the best birthday gift to read your story.
Dixie is amazing. I love her and her craziness.
I love Nate, Dan and Lois too. I like Dan the best.
I'm sad that Ellie choice Kyle, but I think I knew that she was going too.
Amazing , wonderful. I can't wait for more.Author's Response: HAPPY BIRTHDAY! I hope that you have had an amazing day! (and love all your presents)!!
I'm so happy that this chapter made a good present. I wish that I had known. :D
Dixie is very mental, that is what makes her so fun to write. Ellie and Kyle were always meant to be together, but you never know what might happen from here.
I will update soon. Thanks for the review. Report Review
oh. I love it. And this just makes Dixie, even more of my favorite character. She is miss all knowing. :) I love it.
I'm so glad James is finally coming to his senses. Him and Chic are perfect for each other.
I loved the chapter. It was amazing.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
And I can't wait for the Freddie and Dixie sequal.Author's Response: Thank you so much. That's so nice to know :D
I'm glad that Dixie is your favourite character, I love her. she's everything that I wish I could be. The sequel is well under way, I think that I am half way through writing chapter four. It's called Seven. I know, odd name.
James and Chic are two very stubborn people. :P But I thought that it was about time that James finally let up a little.
Thank you very much, again. I'm glad that you liked it. I will update soon! Report Review
I love it.
It was amazing. I really like the butterfly trick.
I love butterflies. :)
I like how the painting take a special liking to Charisma.
This whole chapter made me smile. :)
And I just wanted to let you know I did find the balloons.
I can't wait for the next chapter. ;)
MariaAuthor's Response: Thanks so much. :D 640th review. You rock!
I'm glad that you liked the whole butterfly trick, I thought that it was cute. :P I'm also happy that the chapter made you smile. It's always good to know. I will update soon! I'm glad those balloons didn't give you too much trouble. Report Review
Awe. Sweet love.
I was so happy to come home and find this story posted and reading for me to read. :)
Especially after had to go get balloons and couldn't find them.
I love that Drew is back. It made me smile.
I was dancing for joy. :)
Dixie is lovely. I love her.
But Dom scares me a little, I must admit.
I would love for you to write to a story about her.
I think it would be amusing.
I'm so glad you undated.
I love it.
I think my favorite part is when she punched Kyle.
I was laughing so hard when she turned to Drew and said "I punched Kyle."
and he said "You punched Kyle."
That was the best.
MariaAuthor's Response: Balloons? I hope that you can find them now! I love balloons, they are so fun to play with.
I couldn't leave Drew out for long, I love him to death. he seems to have a little fan club building. And for Dixie...her sequel is coming along quite nicely. :P
I think that she is feisty and sharp, but still caring and funny, I'm really glad that you like her cause it was so hard to characterise her.
Dom. Dearest Dom. I love her. In most stories about her on this site, she is either a raging lunatic or a wet pushover to her sister. That, or having an affair with Teddy. I decided to stick with the raging lunatic route who can compete in a competitive conversation with her sister. :P
You're liking the punching of Kyle? Love it.
Thank you so much for the review. I am so glad that you liked this chapter. I will update soon. XD Report Review
I must say that I stumbled upon this story at complete random.
And I am glad I did.
I read the first chapter, and fell in love with the story.
I love the Albus that you created, and Mara.
This is truly wonderful.
I hope that you update soon.
MariaAuthor's Response: Wow, thanks! I'm really glad you like them so far. Especially Al because you'll definitely be seeing him a lot more in the next chapter.
Anyways, thanks for reviewing! The next chapter is finished, I'm just waiting for my other story to validate and I'll put it in the queue.
Rose Red :) Report Review
I loved it. I love Dan. Yay Dan and Yay Nate. I love how they don't care it made me smile. But I'm still made at Drew and Kyle. :( And Fred, is still on my good side. But Dan beats him. :)
I would like to have Dan as my friend, and Nate. :)
I love you! Yup, I really do. You make the characters come to life.
-MariaAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad that you like Dan. He's pretty cool right? I tried to make the Ravenclaws' as laid back as possible. Freddy will always be there (no matter how hard the rest try, he will always be there). Thank you so much for telling me that I make my characters come to life, it made my year! plus it's so nice to hear. Report Review
I love this story. It was such a great ending. I'm so happy that you ending it like that. Beautiful. :)
I hope you do do a one-shot.
MariaAuthor's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read! And for the lovely review (: Report Review
I love this story. I can't believe that James did that. And I wonder what Evie is going to do now that she knows.
As for Dixie, I love her. She is amazing. I would have to say that she is my second favorite character, next to Charisma. :)
I can't wait for the story, about Fred and Dixie. I'm so excited.
Another great chapter.
MariaAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review Maria :)
James is a bit of a screw up. But he usually finds a way to fix things. I guess he may have dug himself too deep this time. You'll just have to wait and see. Hehe, I am a meanie.
You're a Dixie lover! Woop! You're finally coming out from hiding. Not many people seemed to liker her, so I am glad to hear that a few are out there. To have her as your second favourite character is amazing. I'm over the moon that you're looking forward to the sequal. XD
Awesomeness -that's what you're made of. Report Review
I love this story! It is amazing. I love it. I love it. I love it. Sorry for that. I just wanted to get my point across. I can't wait for you to update. I love Roxanne, and Teddy. It was so funny him showing up. I love it. 20/10 Report Review
I love this story. I'm really sad to see that it is over. :( 10/10Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks for reviewing :) Report Review
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