Reading Reviews From Member: beeinthebonnet
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Review #1, by beeinthebonnetLost and Found: So Close To Happiness

23rd January 2007:
Anxiously anticipating the next chappie!

Author's Response: I am so happy that you are anxiously awaiting! Thanks for reviewing, I will try to update soon!!!!!!!!

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Review #2, by beeinthebonnetJust One Night: The Pain of Losing You

4th January 2007:
Ok. I tend to be somewhat of an opptomist and seeing as how I have a feeling that I know part of what Charlie has up his sleeve for Hermione I am anxious to read the next chapter. This is a good plot twist that you have going on and perhaps it will create some new stories in the minds of others. Perhaps when I finish what I am working on now it will create some new story line in my own world.

Author's Response: YAY! An opptomist, I am one as well. I am glad that you have a feeling for what Charlie is planning, and I am glad you are anxious for the next chapter. I am glad to inspire others to have ideas for Charlie/Hermione this site is lacking in this ship. Thanks for the review, the update should be soon!

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Review #3, by beeinthebonnetThe delite before christmas: Courage

21st December 2006:
You have a good plot line here but this needs some work. Not trying to knock you down or anything but the typos need to be cleaned up and you might sit down and try to center the story around your theme. It is kind of running around in circles. If you want me too I might be able to beta it for you. You could type them in word and then email them to me at to proof them before you post them.

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Review #4, by beeinthebonnetI Missed You: Memories

18th December 2006:
Nice Cliffie waiting on the next installment

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! And i'm sorry it was soo short, I was just getting used too it! Chapter 2 will be better, you have my word! =)

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Review #5, by beeinthebonnetCaring For The Enemy: The Fury Of Lucius Malfoy

15th December 2006:
Just thought that I would drop you a line and let you know how to spell Cruciatus for any editing that you might want to do.

Author's Response: Thanks for that, i changed it as soon as i read this review. i knew i had spelt it wrong but i just had a mental block! thanks again for that. if you pick up any other mistakes just let me know. i'd appreciate that. Cheers!

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Review #6, by beeinthebonnetIt started in the Locker room: Chapter thirteen

15th December 2006:
This is such an interesting take on the whole story and I love it. I am getting excited to see where it goes and have been following it through on the updates. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That is so nice to hear, well technically, read, and thank you so much for the review! I hope you enjoy the rest of it!

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Review #7, by beeinthebonnetHarry Potter and The Rise of The New Lords.: New to The Family

10th December 2006:
I am interested as ever as I have been following the stories. Nice work. Keep writing.

Author's Response: Thanks. Third chapter has been added.

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