Reading Reviews From Member: Anastazia Silverwind
  
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Review #1, by Anastazia SilverwindAmong the Lost and Forgotten: Sirius Jacob Black

15th March 2006:
oOOH! I love... A story about the sorting hat, very intriguing...

Author's Response: Thanks! We're glad you liked it!

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Review #2, by Anastazia SilverwindCrimson Regret: Chapter One: Prefects Can't Be Perfect

11th January 2006:
Love it, I love depressed Hermione, very cannon

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Review #3, by Anastazia SilverwindSomeone Like You: Harry's Apology

26th December 2005:
and this is it? No last letter from Hermione? Ahhh! The lack of closure kiiiiiiills me....:( more?

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Review #4, by Anastazia SilverwindSomeone Like You: Ron's Reply

26th December 2005:
hehe, lovely, a little sappy, but lovely.

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Review #5, by Anastazia SilverwindSomeone Like You: Hermione's Letter

26th December 2005:
OOoh! This is fantasitc, the writing of it anyway. I love the depth of the emotion and the way you tied it into the actual events. Fantasic.

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Review #6, by Anastazia SilverwindAfter the End: Back to the World

26th December 2005:
Um, there's no depth. This doesn't mean anything to me. Where is the emotion at seeing his son? Where is Ginny's when she see's Harry? You don't just get over the father of your child! This doesn't mean anything to me, it lacks intimacy.

Author's Response: It's easier to get over a person than you think it is. I am sorry you didn't like it though

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Review #7, by Anastazia SilverwindAfter the End: Awakening to an Unwanted Life

26th December 2005:
I like the plot, I feel like you could be a little more fluent, sometimes the writings a little abrubt. I think you could add more emotion to Harry, he seems to be taking this all very well. And Hermione's best friend of how many years just wakes up from a coma and there's no shrieking? As I said, more emotion would be a good thing.

Author's Response: Ya, more emotion is probably a good thing. Thanks for the tip

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