The 1001 review! As I totally missed review 1000 :D
I really like that Dimitri is thinking about Hugo and worrying about him, I think he's beginning to care for him more and more.
I love that Hugo is messing with his head and that poor Hugo is being blamed for many things happening to Dimitri :D Hugo is definately on Dimitris mind and I love it!
Zack doesn't like Teddy? I wonder why?
And what's up with Teddy? :-( Why are his eyes red?
So Hugo, Skander and Dimitri are all there, I hope that Dimitri and Skander get on with each other, or as well as Skander can get on with other people :D
And the bickering has started :D
I'm glad the transformation went a bit better for Hugo in that his friends could be there with him.
And now they know that Timothy is a werewolf.
I can't wait to read more of your wonderful story! I love it so much, mainly because it's got Hugo and Skander and werewolves and because you're an amazing writer :D Report Review
Haha Lily hugged Skander? I would have loved to see his face!
Skander is definately the best friend for going with him and being there for him.
Mmm are the werewolves going to be the bad side in the war between the two? It must be bad if Skander doesn't want Hugo to go over to them.
I'm glad that Teddy won't say anything to the family until Hugo plucks up the courage to say something, but I don't think it'll be long until one of them works it out or finds out.
There's something with Skander? What could it be? Gah!!! He has a secret that I need to know!! :D
There's a lot going on at the moment and it's all focused on poor Hugo.
I can't wait to read more! and find out more about their plans for everything.
Another wonderful chapter hun! Not long to go until 1000 reviews!! :D Report Review
That's strange that Hugo didn't hear Skander appear, he's very sneaky then.
So he knows? I wonder if he was told or he worked it out? And he was worried about Hugo on the full moon, he must really care for him.
Oh so some guy told Skander? That can't be good, who was it? Timothy? Who is this mysterious Timothy? Mm?
Ahh the mysterious Timothy is a werewolf. I'm worried about everyone trying to take Hugo :-( I hope he's kept safe from harm.
Bella is a Seer? I am loving all of these new characters and their talents! :D
I got all happy to read that Dimitri is still thinking about Hugo kissing him, I hope that there's more soon! Hehe :D
I'm really worried about what could happen to Hugo and Teddy with both sides after them :-S I wonder who will make the first move? Report Review
Uh-oh Riley has figured out that Hugo was bitten :-( I hope that's not bad for him. Although it might be if the vampires will be after him too.
Zack could be scary, well he is scary thinking about what he could do? I wouldn't want to make him angry.
Who could be following Riley? I'm worried that it'll be a new vampire?
Yay! Skander! :D But he's avoiding Hugo, that can't be good :-( especially if Hugo is worried about it, Skander has got to know about Hugo being a werewolf.
Ooo new characters in the next chapter! I love new characters :D and I'm really intrigued by werewolf plans so can't wait to read them :D Report Review
I just feel more sorry for Hugo after every chapter, He's been through so much and to do it practically alone is amazing. I'm still so glad that Dimitri is there as wsa Teddy, they're great people.
I love that you have him having symptoms before and after the full moon and have some traits of the werewolf present in him such as his temper.
I really want him to tell Lily! :( He's had perfect opportunities to :-( Oh Hugo, you need lots and lots of hugs!
Riley is very into his job, does he quite often get that sucked in?
So there are new vampires attacking? That's not good at all :-S
I hope that Teddy can get through to Hugo and make him talk to someone. I don't want him being so afraid anymore. Report Review
Aww poor terrified Hugo, you've written his annoyance and terror at the prospect of a full moon very well, very well described. I liked how he was messing up his hair and rubbing his hands together as though for something to do.
He's so scared and I just want to hug him :-( *hugs Hugo* but I'm so glad that Teddy is helping him out and telling him what to do and where to go to be safe.
Oh Hugo :-( I really liked that Dimitri was there keeping an eye on Hugo.
I'm glad that it's comfortable around them now and that Dimitri will be there next time. I can't wait to see what happens between them now, especially after that kiss! :p
I hope that there's more kissing soon :D Report Review
Reading this story makes me want to write a werewolf story myself!
I really want Hugo to say something to his mum and dad, they can help him. I know he's worried but I don't want him to be alone through this :-(
Hugo can't not get smart with someone, he's a smart guy! But yay he found Dimitri I hope that he helps him.
I'm so glad that Hugo won't have to go through a full moon on his own now and that Dimitri will be around.
I thought I was imagining Theo appearing in stories because I want to see him in every story but yay!! Theo!! :D What are they up to? Cheeky people!
I can't wait to see how Hugo manages his first full moon, it's going to be painful for sure. Report Review
Yay! I'm finally reading the sequel!
Louis can't work computers and such? Aww he's like a little old man :D
I am loving that Ciaran is living with Kyle and Luka, what happened in his own flat?
Their conversations are so funny :D Each of them moaning about hearing the other, hehe. Brilliant! I'm glad Ciaran made them pay.
I'm so happy that Ciaran's old school friend is there, it's nice that Ciaran can actually see him now.
I still can't get over the fact that Ciaran has the illusion with the glasses that makes him able to see. It's fantastic! I always get so happy knowing how much it's helped him and made him able to see everyone.
I wonder if Louis will ever talk to his grandmother again? It's sad that what she said caused a big rift :-(
I really want to know why Ciaran is famous :D I love that he's enjoying himself a lot being at uni, even though he's obviously missing Louis. I can't wait for more chapters :D Report Review
Thank god for that!
I love that no matter what the situation is Theo will always be sassy! He's been shot yet he still has time to say awesome things like that!
I really hope that they find Danny, I don't want him to be out there where he can still hurt poor Theo!
Aww Alexei is so cute! His daddy is definately a hero I'm so glad that Hugo was saved and Blaise.
I'm so glad that everything is working out nicely :D and I'm glad that Ron approves of Theo and Tam... I mean Hermione being together :p
So Blaise has noticed how strange Hugo is? I hope that Hugo doesn't turn out to be a really bad person :-( Although he would make a great evil geinus mastermind!
I can't wait for the sequel!! This story has been sucn an amazing read and I enjoyed it so much! I loved it! Report Review
In my head Hermione is totally me! I'm so jealous of her right now!
It's so sad that Theo has to go and face La Oscurita :-( If he dies I will be so heartbroken that I would probably die from sadness too.
They were so cute when they were getting dressed and giving each other quick glances, if only it was all under better circumstances.
No! Theo can't say goodbye to Alexei! :-( It's so sad. I really hope that Theo comes back unharmed.
I also don't want Hermione to die :-( I'm so worried about the ending of this story incase I become really sad :-(
You go sassy Theo! Staring danger face on and he has time to be sassy! Love it!
Oh wow, Theo's dream really came true and Hermione did fall, although I am so glad that Superhero Harry was there to save her :D
NOO! How could you do that to me!? Theo! No! *hyperventilates* Report Review
It feels weird to read one of your stories with a female Dom :D
I really like how you've written her, and having her as the fasionable one that has a job as a fashion columnist. I would have seen Victoire doing that job so this is very original :D
I'm glad that she's helping Rose get the attention of Teddy.
Haha noone can call her Nicky!! I'm so glad that Kieron is in this one too! even though he's only been mentioned. I love Kieron a lot! :D
Yay!! He's coming on the holiday! So happy!
I love Teddy in this! And I'm so glad that he jumped into the pool carrying Dom, so hilarious!
This story is going to be so fun! I can tell already :D
You're updating a lot recently, I love it! :D Report Review
Oh wow fired on the second day of a job! That takes some doing!
I wonder what he said?
He was going to throw a brick? Talk about being reckless!
I really want to hug Damian, he seems so down on himself and it doesn't sound like he's too happy with his life :-(
He knows the missing girl? I can't wait to find out how and who she is?
Who are Damian's parents? And why does he not seem to like his mum? Is he not allowed to see her?
Harry is so quick, I don't know how Damian thought that he wouldn't know what he was doing in his office. Go Harry! Being all smart and able to catch things.
Ahh so Damian's dad is Albus!
Is Lexi, Alexa? I love these connections so much!! :D It's like pointing out celebrities when they appear in other stories :D
A great second chapter! I can't wait to find out why people are disappearing! Report Review
I really like how Albus hates quidditch, it's very different and original.
Albus has a secret friend? I hope we get to meet him one day!
I wonder how everyone is going to react to Rich going to the night out?
Oh Emmett, I love him so! I really love that he only seemed to be offended by the feaky comment :D
Haha I was thinking that Emmett was Sherlock too! :D He's so clever! And I totally shop Sherlock/Watson :D
Poor Al at the end being all jealous, I want him to tell her so they can live happily ever after! :D Report Review
I hope that their friends take it well and that none of them react badly.
It's so funny that Louis is still trying it on with the Healer, I wonder if he'll ever stop, or manage to get a date?
They already know? haha, they're brilliant! and I think it's great that Al and Lexy want to keep the babys gender a secret, that's going to be a nice surprise at the end.
I wonder who Emmett is dating? Mmm I want to find out :D I hope he's nice!
I really love how close all of the friends are and how well you've written them, it's easy to see from the way that you've written them that they're going to be great friends for a very long time. They're so at ease with each other and really care for each other a lot. Fantastic writing :D Report Review
Will Kieron ever forgive Albus? :D
I love how wild Lily is, she's excellent!
Oh wow drunk Chris is smart for working that out, but yay someone else knows :D and he is definately right about Albus liking Alexa.
I really like Chris, he is so cool and a very good friend. I love that everyone wants them to name the baby after them, if they choose a name from everyone it's going to be one long name so it's good that they're not :D
I love that Chris is now sleeping on the couch, I wonder how long he'll end up staying for?
I did recognise Ewan and Will :D I love it so much that your stories connect with each other! Really really love it :D
Another wonderful chapter my lovely :D Report Review
Poor Albus having Lily as an alarm clock, I bet he'll miss that when he moves out :p
Harry is so funny, making jokes about Al and Alexa and the last time they had a party, I love him.
Al is definately right about Alexa's family being intimidating, I really wouldn't want to get on the wrong side of them.
I like hearing about where Aurors train, and how much thought you've put into it all, such as how they train and what their choices are for their last year. It all reminds me of the training in Vampire Academy :D Theo should totally turn up and be the Dimitri and then someone could be the Rose. I mean er.
I love that Theo only seemed to agree to them taking the beds because Daphne said no :D I hope we see more between them.
No we can't have a sad Theo! If he wants I can so live there with him :D
I can't wait for the party to start! I wonder if anyone will find out somehow? Report Review
Yay!! You've updated this story :D
Poor Teddy being woke up like that and being in pain from it, I have a feeling he might get hurt a lot more during the story.
I agree with Teddy that they are definately up to something, they can't be that sweet for no reason.
Oh Hugo, so troublesome in everyone of your stories :D I have a special place for him in my heart, right next to the Theo part.
I love what George said about the twins being protectors and using his shop as a way to get back at people, it's so funny!
Awww George talking about being a twin and how they work with each other no matter what it is.
Uhoh they've gone missing! That certainly does not bode well for Teddy at all! Phew they've been found, but they're still behaving. I don't trust them at all though, they've got to be up to something. haha and that's why! Brilliant! :D
They are very naughty! Haha, Poor Teddy, especially if they already have tricks learnt from James going on. I don't think he's going to survive this without going crazy.
Such a funny chapter! I love Lorcan and Lysander, they are such a handful and I can't wait to see Teddy being tortured by them more :D I'm so happy that you took this story off of Hiatus! :D Report Review
Look at Albus being uncomfortable and all cute :D
He's so funny when he was telling Healer Moore about his 'symptoms' :D
Yay! They saw their baby! and I hope that Alexa doesn't get morning sickness either.
I'm glad that Astoria helped get a maternity ward in the hospital and that Draco donated money.
Louis is there and hurt? Oh my what did he do? He is brilliant and funny and has a lot of nerve to flirt with the Healer, and do an extremely good job of it as well, until the ending when he was shut down!
Oh no she's got her sickness :-( I can see this being a long few months for her.
I can't wait to read more, I love how you write Albus and Alexa together, they seem so much like the best of friends and they're so comfortable around each other. :D Report Review
It's great to see the 'Grandads' talking in hushed whispers, I wonder what they've got planned?
Er that estate agent better not be flirting with our Theo! Unless it's secretly one of us! Although I don't blame her, how could she resist his awesome charms?
They should so be room mates!! and maybe more... but for now room mates!
It's kinda like a proposal haha but with an apartment instead of a ring :D
I yay a lot :D
Haha Harry is so funny going all red and spluterry :D
Oh Theo of course she's always going to be spending more of your money, she is your little girl! :D
That estate agent is definately good at her job.
I love that they're looking at apartments together, they're such grown ups now. And that they're embarassed by the Weasley car hehe.
I think that they're going to want the house, Theo and Harry better be prepared to part with more money I'm thinking.
Awww oh Alexa she's so cute getting all worked up like that. and pulling the puppy dog look and the pouted lip to get around Theo, and how he cracks at seeing it. Dad's can never resist that look!
"It's an apartment with stairs," I love Al's line!
Yay! They got the house!! Theo is awesome! :D Report Review
Yay!! Albus's POV telling his family, I wonder if they'll react like Alexa's family?
Aww Albus keeps thinking of that night, I think he might like Alexa, more then friends :D
Harry is such a great supportive dad, I hope he still will be when he finds out what Albus wants to tell them.
Oh my god! Kieron turned up before Louis, Albus is right to be scared, I would be terrified.
And he told them and then chased Albus! Poor Albus!
Poor poor Albus being hurt and dealing with Theo who's skilled in Occlumency.
I love how Albus thinks about Alexa, it's clear how much he cares about her and would do anything for her.
Theo and Harry are definately the best dad's ever! And Kieron is a great protective older brother.
Theo's threat of coming after him if he ever leaves or hurts her was scary. I wouldn't want to get on the wrong side of him.
Haha oh Louis! He's so great just walking in at the end like that and knowing instantly.
Brilliant chapter! I want to see Theo mad but I don't want him to hurt anyone :S I just want more Theo!! :D I think we need to start a Theo fan club? Report Review
I love Theo! :D He's so cheeky! I bet he has lots of plans for when his daughter moves out, he'll have no choice but to be a womaniser!
He is definately the coolest dad ever.
I wonder when they're going to tell their parents? I can't wait to see Theo's reaction, and Kieron's I think Albus might have to hide for a while. His plan to hide for eighteen years and eight months might be a good one :D
I can't wait to see more of Nicky and Kieron, I just know that they're going to be awesome!
oo what happened in the summer? And poor Albus guilt tripped into going shopping.
Awww Theo, I'll be there for you whilst Daphne is there :D
Oh wow, Astoria must be a psychic if she can guess that quickly.
I'm scared for Alexa, I hope it's going to go as well as it can do, she's very brave telling them all on her own.
So Kieron and doesn't like his mum? That'll be interesting to read :D
I love how much tension there is with Daphne being in the room, everyone must really hate/dislike her.
Oh no! Kierons gone! Oh Albus you better run!
VPBC? What is this mysteriousness?
Oh no!! Why? Why must there be such an awesome cliffhanger? It's a good thing I can just go straight to the next chapter! Report Review
I love that you're writing this from their different POVs, it's great to hear both sides of the story :D Albus worrying is still funny, although he has definate reason to be worried, it's great that he done his research :D
I really love that they both know that they're both to blame for this situation, and not just blaming the other... entirely :p
His freaking out makes this situation seem a lot more real.
Awww Albus stays around hers every friday? That's so cute, and I love that he hates his dads cooking :D
Another wonderful chapter! I know I've said it a few times but your such a talented writer, I love all of your stories so very much! Report Review
Albus freaking out is funny, poor him. I hope that their friendship is not ruined by this.
They flow together perfectly and seem to have a great friendship, even in a situation like this. You've written them so well together.
Oh I really hope that Theo catches him, just for the hilarity of it. I loved that he compared her to Kieron, it's funny that Alexa is doing the same thing he said Kieron did. :D
So good! I can't wait to read the next chapter :D Report Review
I really like the freaking out about the future and will happen after Hogwarts, it's very realistic.
And the party is so different to other parties, I really like it.
Also yay! Nicky and Kieron :D
And Albus and Alexa kissed, I think they're going to be growing up a lot quicker now :D
I like how you portrayed them drunk it was very realistic :D
I know I'm going to love reading the rest of this story. Report Review
Awww bless Molly being so teary at seeing her grandson go off to college :D
"Oh, magic was definitely involved somehow," I agree. "Given how... enchanting it was to meet you. You had to have done something to make me want to stick with you for as long as I have. Not many people can do that."
I just squeed because you used the word enchanting in that sentence haha.
Louis's goodbye was sad and the almost proposal was so sweet.
I hope they stay together forever.
I'm so sad that this story has ended, I've loved it so much and you came up with such a fantastically brilliant idea, you wrote it beautifully and you filled it all with such emotion and incredible backstories. I can't wait to read the sequel. Report Review
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