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Review #1, by Lyons_of_the_nightHarry Potter and the Darkness Before the Dawn: Legilimency, Shaken Preconceptions

20th December 2005:
The whole wards part was kinda confusing

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Review #2, by Lyons_of_the_nightHarry Potter and the Darkness Before the Dawn: Happy Sixteenth Hermione

20th December 2005:
Good so far

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Review #3, by Lyons_of_the_nightHarry Potter and the Darkness Before the Dawn: Resetting the Board

20th December 2005:
Really good story so far. though you might want to work on hermione character. She seems pretty out of character

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