{reviewid: 2788123, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
21st May 2013:
I'm really enjoying it so far. The only thing I had trouble with is the fact that Hermione doesn't have golden hair. She has dark brunette hair.
Other than that it's great! This is the first Supernatural crossover I've read and I love it. Harry Potter, great. Supernatural, great! Combination of the two, AWESOME!
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{reviewid: 2784027, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
27th April 2013:
This "love" between Hermione and Anthony has sprung up rather quickly. I'm not sure it's believable at all. Also, I thought this was a Hermione/Draco fic when I searched for stories that was what I entered, and since you said it was an Eragon crossover, I thought Eragon would've been the one sent to Hogwarts. Also I've noticed quite a few grammatical and spelling errors. All in all, not one of my favorites so far.
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{reviewid: 2320917, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
26th March 2010:
Uh oh! Draco's gonna find out! I really enjoy this story! Please update again soon. I'm greatly looking forward to the next chapter. I can't wait to see Draco's reaction, and Hermione's explanation. Please update soon.
10/10
BG
Author's Response: I'm on spring break right now and leave in a few hours to go on college touring trips, but after spring break I promise I will! Thanks a ton for the review!
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{reviewid: 2270606, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
20th December 2009:
Wow...that's about all I can say. Wow. That was an amazing story and you have a wonderful gift.
10/10
BG
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{reviewid: 2270044, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
19th December 2009:
Wow. That was an amazing story. I would love to see a sequel perhaps? After they have kids or something. lol. Anyway, it was a great read. You're a wonderful author and I look forward to reading more of your work.
100/10
BG
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Haha, no, I don't think I'll write a sequel. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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{reviewid: 2268108, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
15th December 2009:
Wow...this is an amazing story. I'm absolutely loving it. Please update soon!
10/10
BG
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{reviewid: 2187587, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
9th August 2009:
OOO! So good! I'm in love with this story! Please update soon! I'm looking forward to reading more! Keep up the amazing work!
10/10
BG
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
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{reviewid: 2154888, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
4th July 2009:
Absolutely amazing! I loved it! So funny! I'm really looking forward to finishing reading the Game of Love. Please update it soon! lol.
10/10
BG
Author's Response: Thank you for reading & reviewing! And yes, I will update the Game of Love soon. :)
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{reviewid: 2079263, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
20th March 2009:
Oohh...Hermione's going to look so pretty! I can hardly wait for the chapter with the ball. I'm really liking where you're going with this story so far. Please update soon.
10/10
BG
Author's Response: aww. thanks so much. I'm glad that my descriptions weren't too terrible. :D thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 2074086, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
13th March 2009:
I'm really enjoying it. Keep up the excellent work. I'm greatly looking forward to reading more. Please update soon.
P.S. I like the format that you have going, the flashback chapters, and the conversations between Hermione and Rose, and then the non-flashback chapters. It gives the story more depth, and shows the relationships between all of the characters more than just the ones in the flashbacks. Again, keep up the great work! Looking forward to the next chapter!
10/10
BG
Author's Response: thanks so much BG! i thought the flashbacks and non-flashbacks would give it a good format ^_^
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{reviewid: 2072953, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
11th March 2009:
Wow...that was a really good chapter. I'm quite impressed. I'm really enjoying this story. I'm glad that Draco finally told Hermione who Adria was and what happened to her. Maybe soon they'll be able to figure out how to stop her, and save Draco. Anyway, greatly looking forward to the next chapter, as always. Keep up the excellent work!
10/10
BG
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{reviewid: 2062294, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
24th February 2009:
I really like this chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing what Renesme thinks of Hogwarts and all the trouble that I'm sure she's going to get into. lol. Anyway, keep up the good work and please update soon!
10/10
BG
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{reviewid: 2061622, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
23rd February 2009:
It's a really good chapter. I'm looking forward to reading the next one when it's up. The only criticism I have is that Alice wouldn't have been able to see Remus coming because she can't see werewolves. Thats the only thing I can think of. Other than that it's really good. Thank you for leaving me a review asking me to check it out. I'm glad I did. Please update soon.
10/10
BG
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah, I took it into consideration that Alice can't see werewolves therefore she shouldn't of seen Lupin, but that fact that he's a wizard kind of toys with her visions. Not just him being, part werewolf/ part wizard, but every wizard in particular messes her visions up. Sometimes she sees the, sometimes not. This story won't be that accurate but I'm trying to put some of my own stuff in it. But thanks for telling me about your concern. I hope my explanation helped.
Thanks a million!!!
Clair Clementine : ]
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{reviewid: 2059206, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
19th February 2009:
Wow...that was a really good chapter. I'm kind of confused as to why Hermione and Ron were so affecte by Draco's supposed death. And why does Ron feel that it's the least he can do to look for Draco's body? Just a couple questions. Anyway, keep up the great work and I hope you update soon.
10/10
BG
Author's Response: Okey dokes! Will add why soon (*Wink wink)
Thanks for the review!
I did have a new chapter written, but I'm not sure if I wanna upload it.
Will upload soon.
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{reviewid: 2054696, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
13th February 2009:
Ha Ha! Bubble Buffy! That reminds me of the episode in Season 4 called Beer Bad. When Buffy kept daydreaming about Parker. And she was talking to Willow about it n said something like, "Maybe he keeps the girls he really likes in these little mind bubbles and soon he'll decide he wants more than just Bubble Buffy and he'll pop me out and we'll go to dinner...It could happen." lol. I laughed so hard in that episode.
I'm glad I found this fic. It's good so far. I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.
9/10
BG
Author's Response: Omg haha you know what, i based it pretty much on that!! I'm glad i found a fellow Buffy fan who recognised it! I really loved that episode too.."Beer Bad? Beer good!"
Thankyou very much, i appreciate you reading it..:D xx
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{reviewid: 2052885, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
10th February 2009:
Very good chapter. Please update soon. I'm very much looking forward to reading more. Keep up the great work!
10/10
BG
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{reviewid: 2052882, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
10th February 2009:
Interesting. Keep up the good work and please update soon! Looking forward to reading more!
10/10
BG
Author's Response: thank you so much!!! i'll try to finish chapter 6 soon! :D
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{reviewid: 2052871, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
10th February 2009:
Ooo...I really like it. This story is definately one of my favs! Please update soon as I'm looking forward to reading more! Keep up the great work!
10/10
BG
Author's Response: I'll try to update soon, I have an idea of how they'll find out, just not what should happen in between. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
xoxox
~ginny_malfoy22
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{reviewid: 2049265, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
4th February 2009:
O...M...G...you have an amazing gift. I was drawn into this story so much. It is so good! Please update soon! I'm really looking forward to reading more!
Oh, and I would love it if you could make me a banner for Changes. That would be so great! Thanks!
10/10
BG
Author's Response: Hey there!
Thanks a bunch ^^ ^^
Anyway, I made a banner for you. It's not that great, and I was going insane, wondering if I should put Edward in it too???
So, tell me if you want me to make a banner with Edward in it, if he's a main character. Or if you want me to use Emma Watson in the banner. Well, cheerios. ^^
Erm... The Link can't be sent via this, so... I'll message you the link. ^^
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{reviewid: 2044746, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
29th January 2009:
This story is great. I'm absolutely loving it. Keep up the excellent work. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter, so please update soon.
10/10
BG
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far. I'll be starting on the next chapter as soon as I can.
Thanks for reading!
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{reviewid: 2044520, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
29th January 2009:
I like it. Although you do seem to switch between characters quite a bit. I understand that this story is about all of them, but just try to make their scenes a bit longer, or even dedicate a whole chapter to the different scenes. Just a suggestion. Other than that it's really good. Looking forward to reading more. Please update soon.
9/10
BG
Author's Response: Good suggestion... I should try and make them longer.
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{reviewid: 2042867, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
27th January 2009:
I'm really enjoying it. I like the fact that you're taking the time to give the readers background info. It's really good. Keep up the awesome work, and please update soon as I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
10/10
BG
Author's Response: Thanks so much, BG! I'm glad that you're okay with all of the time I'm taking to make sure everyone has the necessary background information. Even though it's probably annoying that the story moves slowly, I just don't think it could process well without it. I'll try my hardest to update soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!! :)
Keep it jazzy,
DJjazzyCarlton
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{reviewid: 2042845, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
27th January 2009:
Lol. I like it. It's interesting. Keep up the good work. The only criticism I have is that all Muggle devices such as cell phones, don't work at Hogwarts. lol. There's a spell on the castle that causes them to stop working. It was mentioned in one of the books. I believe that it was Hermione that mentioned it, or quoted it rather, from Hogwarts: A History. And now I realize that makes me sound totally obsessed. *Blushes* Anyway...lol that's the only thing I can think of. Other than that it's really good. Keep up the awesome work and please update soon as I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
9/10
BG
Author's Response: Omg! Don't worry your not too obsessed! I relized that after I wrote it, but I just decided to ignore that fact. I'll throw something in the next chapter about how the cell phone is working! Thanks for the review and the high rating!
~Aurora
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{reviewid: 2041959, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
26th January 2009:
Ooo...very interesting. Please update soon. Looking forward to reading more. Keep up the excellent work.
10/10
BG
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch, Brooke!
I love your reviews -- I love it when people review like, every chapter ;) It's fun knowing I've captivated readers.
I'm updating soon!
Thanks again!
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{reviewid: 2041958, reviewer: 'Brooke%20Granger'}
26th January 2009:
Interesting. It's really good. Keep up the awesome work and please update soon, as I'm looking forward to reading more.
10/10
BG
Author's Response: thanks for your the review and will update soon.
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