hey!!! It's Christina, in case you didn't already know... I just re-read everything, and it's still awesome! Oh, and I looked at the banner ... very pretty! Alright, so I guess that's all I had to say. Thanks for sharing the story with us. xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoAuthor's Response: OMG its a flamer!!!!
You flamer stop harassing me!!!
Hahaha aww thanks that makes me feel special.
I love my banner person haha
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The plot of this story is very interesting! It's also well written...but I do have a suggestion: using contractions make the reading of the chapter easier and more pleasing to the reader (reading dialouge with no contractions is kind of like you or me reading old English) I'm not saying to use a lot of slang or anything, but I think that it would be easier to read if there were more contractions...while your typing, think of it like you're speaking it...people wouldn't normally say something like : Oh, that is okay. I will do it myself. You should not have come... and so on. Some one would say That's okay...I'll...shouldn't...The only other thing was a few spelling mistakes. But, I'm only a reader...great chapter! Update soon please! Report Review
Cooleo...update soon. Report Review
Loved it! I see that you're a Charmed fan as well...wasn't the last episode so sad?? I cried forever haha!...Update soon please!Author's Response: I miss Charmed.....I cried too! Thanks for the Review!!! XOXO SG♥ Report Review
I NEED SUGGESTIONS!! PLEASE REVIEW!! Report Review
It was good....really interestingtwists. Update soon! Report Review
Good...UPdate soon!! Report Review
Loooved it! I still don't see Luna and Ron together...It shall take some getting used to...but I think I can do that! Update soon!! Report Review
this is really good so far! can't wait to see what happens! hey, i was wondering how you get those banners? Report Review
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