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Review #1, by beesmakehoneyUnaffected: 5

8th October 2006:
love the Sydney Bremer quote!
And the comment about matchmaking- so so true!
Bridie (the most disastrous matchmaker ever, and a survivor of many bad set ups!)

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Review #2, by beesmakehoneyUnaffected: 4

8th October 2006:
Absolutely love it, as usual.
if I had to make a criticism it would be that therapists/counsellors are never supposed to say things like... so you must have felt like xzy.... it's one of there things, for good reasons.
Well done, brilliant dynamic between Draco and Ginny, and I love the bits where her proffesional mask slip a bit! Thanks, Bridie

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Review #3, by beesmakehoneyUnaffected: 3

8th October 2006:
Really good, loved it! especially this bit...
"she looked up and did something that caught Draco totally off guard.
She smiled at him."
And thanks for using a female Blaise Zabini, my twin Blaise is endlessly irritated that eeryone only uses a male one!
Bridie


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Review #4, by beesmakehoneyUnaffected: Chapter Two

8th October 2006:
Great, I like the idea of therapist being to help everybody but herself move on... It's so so true! Bridie

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Review #5, by beesmakehoneyUnaffected: Chapter One

8th October 2006:
wow, I love it...
"And as Ginny knew full well, war didn’t discriminate based on bloodlines." ...great line!
I love your style of writing, and i'll try not to let my jealousy spoil the rest of the story for me! ;)
Well done, Bridie



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Review #6, by beesmakehoneyThe Exchange Student: The Exchange Student

22nd September 2006:
Great first chapter i thought, i'm on a waking night at work and it's woken me right up and distracted me, and crucially stopped me dozing off and getting fired!!!
i particularly like the bit about ron writing hermiones name all over a piece of paper!
Bridie

Author's Response: haha, thank you very much. i'm glad you like my story, i wrote it so long ago i had to think about chapter one for a minute. haha... keep reading.

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Review #7, by beesmakehoneyA Glimpse Of The Future: A Glimpse Of The Future

22nd September 2006:
I love it, really good- very clever, good vocabulary, etc, etc, etc...
if i was going to go over it looking for bits to improve/work on, which i love doing, so here goes....
1- possibly add a little more descriptive language perhaps (?)...
2- the dialogue on the train platform could be broken up abit.
(3- not sure about this one but wouldn't ginny be a little more angry?.... )

and i love the last line ...

“Let’s just say… I had A Glimpse of the Future.”
genius!

please write something more and if you ever have a couple of minutes i'd really love to know what you thought of the third chapter in my story "The miracles of....."
Well done, Bee (Bridie)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Almost nobody reviews and I think i've had a little over 250 reads!
1. I know i should have added alot more descriptive language
2. (it was the train compartment) but anyway, thanks for that advice
3. In every story i've read i think Ginny is always angry for too long, even though thats her personality, I wanted her to be forgiving for once!

Thanks for that comment about the last line, it just suddenly hit me as I was rounding up the story!

I just reviewed your 3rd chapter, and I think it's great. I might do another one-shot, or even a short story, but I'll never get the updates out fast enough, and i HATE it when authors don't update in months! well thanks for you whole review!

~HarryandGinny Fan


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Review #8, by beesmakehoneyThe Visible Invisible: Collision of Truths

3rd September 2006:
weird, but in a good way! very "Mists of Avalon" like, love it!!! (if you havent read that series you should!!!
well done, a great chapter in brilliant story! Bee

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Review #9, by beesmakehoneyNymphadora Tonks and the Seven Deadly Sins: Envy

18th March 2006:
I love the.... falliing on purpose just to be caught by him bit, and the envy of the teacup, etc. etc.... Bee

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. : D

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Review #10, by beesmakehoneyJourney To Passion: Repentance and Sorrow

16th March 2006:
it's really moving, well done.... Bee

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Review #11, by beesmakehoneyThe Men At the Bar: The Table In the Yard

14th March 2006:
well, tearful sniff..., i, sniff sniff, think it was very moving, wipes away a tear... (by the way that is genuinly true, i'm completly ill and tearfull so it gave me an opportunity to sob away withouth everybody looking at me like i should be put in a mental hospital, as they have been doing whenever i break out in tears because i can't find the bread board or a pencil!!!!) you have really good vocabulary and i also think putting bils thoughts worked really well. thank you very much, it was truelly excellent, please write more!!! Bee

Author's Response: And why should you be mentally ill to like my writing?! "Truly excellent" is a major appraisal for me so again I thank you for a very warm review. I'm working on a few different styles right now. And since I handwrite my stories first it takes me ages to get things on screen! Aww I'm blushing... Thank you so much!

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Review #12, by beesmakehoneyThe Men At the Bar: The Man at the Bar

14th March 2006:
i love your style, its very clear and concise and yet at the same time really flowing and descriptive... Bee

Author's Response: Aww thanks! I like to think I'm flowing and descriptive... and thanks to you I am! Thanks, Bee!

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Review #13, by beesmakehoneyThe Eyes Have It: Beauty is Truth

14th March 2006:
what do they say about werewolves?! loved it... nice different take on the whole thing.... Bee

Author's Response: Well, um...*clears throat*, it's...ah...something along the lines of..."What big EYES you have"...sort of...if you can imagine such a thing...LOL!!!! Glad you liked it. THank you! Paloma

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Review #14, by beesmakehoneyThe Eyes Have It: Dream a Little Dream

14th March 2006:
aaah, it was lovely, well done... Bee

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #15, by beesmakehoneyThe Eyes Have It: Veritaserum

14th March 2006:
not confusing at all, i really liked the parallels between their thoughts... Bee

Author's Response: Thank you - I'm glad it wasn't too confusing. I worried about that, and edited like a lunatic! P

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Review #16, by beesmakehoneyThe Eyes Have It: The Brunette

14th March 2006:
aah, i like it- very cute!!! Bee

Author's Response: Hi bee - I'm glad you like it. It was a freaking hoot to write!!! Paloma

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Review #17, by beesmakehoneyHow Do I Loathe Thee? Let Me Count The Ways: The Black Lake

13th March 2006:
your dialogues really good, it flows very nicely, Bee

Author's Response: thanks again Bee. It's great to hear that you think that. Thanks for reviewing

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Review #18, by beesmakehoneyHow Do I Loathe Thee? Let Me Count The Ways: Head Boy and Girl

13th March 2006:
Ahh i love it. james seems so completely arrogant and completely desperate for her!!! Bee

Author's Response: thanks Bee!

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Review #19, by beesmakehoneyJourney To Passion: Diagon Alley

12th March 2006:
love it!!! Bee

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Review #20, by beesmakehoneyJourney To Passion: The Forgotten Ability

12th March 2006:
god wish i had that ability!! great chapter, well done!

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Review #21, by beesmakehoneyJourney To Passion: Neville\'s Misfortune

12th March 2006:
oh poor neville, but hey if somebody almost killed the love of my life i'd probably have been even more orrible!!! Bee

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Review #22, by beesmakehoneyJourney To Passion: The Fierce Snake

12th March 2006:
you have a lovely style, well done!!!

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Review #23, by beesmakehoneyJourney To Passion: The Loathsome and the Lovely

12th March 2006:
i love her little chats with dumbledore, very sweet...

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Review #24, by beesmakehoneyJourney To Passion: The Loathsome and the Lovely

12th March 2006:
very interesting, quirrel... sounds like it could become very interesting...

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Review #25, by beesmakehoneyJourney To Passion: The First Kiss

12th March 2006:
love it!!!! so sweet how happy was at the kiss...

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